for Changes2/16/2006 c1 
6Death by Dangerous Driving
I like. Oh, the neopets one is good too, but this one is better, so yeah. Anyway, I like the shortened lines and enjambement, adds to the flow. Go YOU!
Juvi
Ps, thanks for reviewing 'The Sky is The Limit.'
6Death by Dangerous DrivingI like. Oh, the neopets one is good too, but this one is better, so yeah. Anyway, I like the shortened lines and enjambement, adds to the flow. Go YOU!
Juvi
Ps, thanks for reviewing 'The Sky is The Limit.'
7/5/2005 c1 sm babee
this is a nice poem..continue to write more, looking forward to it *winks*
btw...thanks for your review
this is a nice poem..continue to write more, looking forward to it *winks*
btw...thanks for your review
4/10/2005 c1 Whispering Voice
Cool poem! Especially like this opart:
"Even rocks change their size and shape
Trees bloom anew each year
As the world varies in form each day."
Cool poem! Especially like this opart:
"Even rocks change their size and shape
Trees bloom anew each year
As the world varies in form each day."