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2/16/2006 c1 6Death by Dangerous Driving
I like. Oh, the neopets one is good too, but this one is better, so yeah. Anyway, I like the shortened lines and enjambement, adds to the flow. Go YOU!


Ps, thanks for reviewing 'The Sky is The Limit.'
7/5/2005 c1 sm babee
this is a nice poem..continue to write more, looking forward to it *winks*

btw...thanks for your review
6/20/2005 c1 270queenvixta
This is really touching. Good work. queenvixta
4/10/2005 c1 Whispering Voice
Cool poem! Especially like this opart:

"Even rocks change their size and shape

Trees bloom anew each year

As the world varies in form each day."

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