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8/6/2005 c1 wingyluva
Is that meant to be a poem, if it is, it need's to rhyme just a little bit to make it more enjoyable and less boring! But it's pretty good if you wrote it in less than a minute
5/5/2005 c1 33Pomaikai
Um...yeah. Hey, I can see where you're coming from, I had a friend like that. Is this a poem or a really short story?
4/26/2005 c1 Emilea
OH NO! i didnt mean nething u c. its just that the american chiq was rite altho she sed she thort i was british...neway! u c da thing is cz we r aussie and mi story is set in america, it means that sometimes i say wierd things that r aussie not amercian!

so plz understand. u r VERY faithful. i agree. evre since the beginning and u reviewd all the time. i still luv u guys and i am reli glad u guys r aussie! i still luv u!


babe anjwl.x

PS: i jst wanted an amercian to help me get american terms rite. heh.
4/12/2005 c1 Guest
ok amanda very strang just like u so no comment lolp.s its cyn^^
4/12/2005 c1 32XxParalaixX
Okies. Constructive critisism... it's got... what's the word? Oh yeah: Promise. It could be improved. It showws the feeling your having (or whatever feeling that posessed you to write about a friend eating monster). Exagerate it.
4/12/2005 c1 47Kenishiro
What? How's the hell did you come up with that?

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