
6/1/2005 c1
270dustytiger
another one that's easy to relate to! *laugh* i really like it good work, thank you for sharing, thanx for the reviews

another one that's easy to relate to! *laugh* i really like it good work, thank you for sharing, thanx for the reviews
5/11/2005 c1
74LaceAnSpiderwebs
I thought it was rough. I liked the undertone, but it was very blunt. You should use a different word for doors. I don't like the focus on the I in this poem, its seems more about the doors than you. Im scared... use a differen word. You use very blunt vocabulary, try finding different words. Have a nice day, i really think this poem has a spark. Make it blaze

I thought it was rough. I liked the undertone, but it was very blunt. You should use a different word for doors. I don't like the focus on the I in this poem, its seems more about the doors than you. Im scared... use a differen word. You use very blunt vocabulary, try finding different words. Have a nice day, i really think this poem has a spark. Make it blaze
4/22/2005 c1 PuzzledThinker
Well thats a million choices. Hm...I liked it. Even if it involved getting Confused
Well thats a million choices. Hm...I liked it. Even if it involved getting Confused
4/19/2005 c1
4Dark Happi Buniy
*sigh* It confused me... Well I'm easily confused. Beside the point, I like these what-ifs poems cause there so rare to find. I ofthen find myself wondering what if I took the other choice. . Nice flow. Please review mine. :)

*sigh* It confused me... Well I'm easily confused. Beside the point, I like these what-ifs poems cause there so rare to find. I ofthen find myself wondering what if I took the other choice. . Nice flow. Please review mine. :)
4/12/2005 c1 kayttea
that is a really good poem. i can never seem to make choices either. like EVER. i can never make desicions but when other people are with me and they can't make desicions then i'm like just decide already! lol.
anyway great poem! the '!' at the end seems a little out of place...*wide grin* but then i know how you love your '!''s! lol. keep on writing talk to you soon!
-kay
that is a really good poem. i can never seem to make choices either. like EVER. i can never make desicions but when other people are with me and they can't make desicions then i'm like just decide already! lol.
anyway great poem! the '!' at the end seems a little out of place...*wide grin* but then i know how you love your '!''s! lol. keep on writing talk to you soon!
-kay