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4/15/2005 c1 38Aneliz Rei
Such elegance. I espcially loved the words in between the double colons at the end of each haiku; they give the peice a wave-like motion, while simultaneously smoothing the flow between movements. You are clearly a talented writer.

Kudos, ~Isa
4/12/2005 c1 Amora Elvenstar
Swool. These are great. Some words and sentences can be debated on if there are enough syllables or too few. Otherwise these are all great and puts the subjects into a new perspective. Though I like how you put the subject separately, that did help a bit.

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