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5/27/2005 c1 10marie alexandria
wow, i freakin love this poem because i can relate to it 110% right now. it flows so naturally and it's just completely honest and beautiful in that state of honesty. wonderful :)
4/14/2005 c1 40Deavon Brooks
oh my! I feel that this poem is a little bit more personal for you, even though almost all of your poems have you personal thoughts and meanings etched onto them. I'm sorry, I just couldn't wait until summer to review you... Personally, I feel that this poems is the most straightforward poem you've ever written. This poem contains probably little, if any, hidden meanings, symbols, or metaphors. I'm glad you're standing up for what you believe in, though. I don't know if this poem reflects anything that happened has ever happened to you, but whatever the reason for creating this poem, I hope that everything ends well.
4/12/2005 c1 270dustytiger
i know people like that, i've never thought to describe them like that tho, good work, i like the idea of thinking of them like that, great work, thank you for sharing

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