for Memories9/11/2005 c1 
59S0ulSearching
Nice! I love the imagery and the message...keep it up-and sory it took so long to get back to you.-pammy-
59S0ulSearchingNice! I love the imagery and the message...keep it up-and sory it took so long to get back to you.-pammy-
7/24/2005 c1 Divine Pocket Dragon
Perfect description of the things we hold so dear; memories. *Hearts*
Perfect description of the things we hold so dear; memories. *Hearts*
7/22/2005 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
I like it! The beauty of rhyme is something oft forgotten by poets of today. You manage to make your rhymes very natural, never mutilating the lines in order to force one. That's talant there. Now, you might want to change the "with out" to "without" but that's the only kink I can really find here. Awfully sweet! Good job.
20Pheobe MeryllI like it! The beauty of rhyme is something oft forgotten by poets of today. You manage to make your rhymes very natural, never mutilating the lines in order to force one. That's talant there. Now, you might want to change the "with out" to "without" but that's the only kink I can really find here. Awfully sweet! Good job.
4/16/2005 c1 87youzi
Not bad at all...i half worried that the rhyme might be forced but you surprised me.Keep writing =D
87youziNot bad at all...i half worried that the rhyme might be forced but you surprised me.Keep writing =D
4/13/2005 c1 8Marie Northcott
I really, really enjoyed that. Very much. it was so simple and beautifully written.
Normally rhyme schemes can make a poem seem very childish, but this one was sophisticated.
Very nice. I'll definitely look at more of your work.
- Marie
8Marie NorthcottI really, really enjoyed that. Very much. it was so simple and beautifully written.
Normally rhyme schemes can make a poem seem very childish, but this one was sophisticated.
Very nice. I'll definitely look at more of your work.
- Marie