for Our Love9/16/2006 c1 
8Marie Northcott
I think that your work in this poem was indredibly well done. I think you have a really well-formed grasp on how poems are supposed to flow and keep syllabically correct. Very, very well done. I think poetry about love in this day and age can be very overdone and cliche but you pulled this off with fying colours. I love it.
8Marie NorthcottI think that your work in this poem was indredibly well done. I think you have a really well-formed grasp on how poems are supposed to flow and keep syllabically correct. Very, very well done. I think poetry about love in this day and age can be very overdone and cliche but you pulled this off with fying colours. I love it.
8/7/2006 c1 Queen of Anonymity
Awesome! Great imagery. I love the rhyming-often when poems rhyme they sound awkward or forced, but this poem flows as if it formed naturally, as if it could never be any other way. Perfect-good job!
Awesome! Great imagery. I love the rhyming-often when poems rhyme they sound awkward or forced, but this poem flows as if it formed naturally, as if it could never be any other way. Perfect-good job!
7/24/2005 c1 Divine Pocket Dragon
I don't know how you make the sentences flow so well together, it's like a natural talent of yours. ^-^
I don't know how you make the sentences flow so well together, it's like a natural talent of yours. ^-^
7/22/2005 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
Wow! This is wonderful! Absolutely beautiful. It read like silk or feathers - like a waltz. I love your work - write more, please!
20Pheobe MeryllWow! This is wonderful! Absolutely beautiful. It read like silk or feathers - like a waltz. I love your work - write more, please!
7/7/2005 c1 16Islandbreeze
Very nice-I love the flow and the images. I don't know that much about poetry but this sounds really beautiful. Nice work!
16IslandbreezeVery nice-I love the flow and the images. I don't know that much about poetry but this sounds really beautiful. Nice work!
4/15/2005 c1 59S0ulSearching
*claps* This is awsome, I really like it a lot, amazing imagery as well. Keep it up.-pammy-
59S0ulSearching*claps* This is awsome, I really like it a lot, amazing imagery as well. Keep it up.-pammy-