for Mirrors4/22/2005 c1 
59Spootasia Tomoe
ooh, doth i detect a hint of tempting going on? it was very lovely, especially the imagery! and it all really came together at the end. i loved the last line- it was perfect. there was one minor mistake but nothing to get up in arms about. just a forgotten space or dash between 'locked' and 'on'.in other words: brava! i'm so happy you put up another poem! i enjoyed reading it much!have a lovely rest of your weekend!'till we meet again!
59Spootasia Tomoeooh, doth i detect a hint of tempting going on? it was very lovely, especially the imagery! and it all really came together at the end. i loved the last line- it was perfect. there was one minor mistake but nothing to get up in arms about. just a forgotten space or dash between 'locked' and 'on'.in other words: brava! i'm so happy you put up another poem! i enjoyed reading it much!have a lovely rest of your weekend!'till we meet again!