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12/3/2007 c28 SuperCUTEJensen
I've just read your whole story...I love it...Poor Lee about her family...I hope that she and Ryan get back together soon...cant wait for the next chapter...
11/24/2007 c28 Wry
OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD.

Whoever is doing this deserves to die... a very very VERY horrible death.

Hailey is very suspicious.

Oh and, is Ryan actually waiting for Lee to make her decision? Or is he being the very cliched bastard and continuing on with his man-whoring love life?
11/24/2007 c11 Wry
Seriously! This story is making me go 'Oh Myy God' at the end of every chapter. Hehe.
11/24/2007 c9 Wry
NO. Jake!

Anyway, you know the part where Olivia and Ryan were just about to have sex and Ryan said that he couldn't feel the spark?

Aren't you supposed to feel that 'spark' around the first time you have sex? I dunno.
11/24/2007 c5 Wry
Oh My God... Ryan needs to get laid?

...Ahem..
11/24/2007 c4 Wry
Wait. Who is Harper? Is Harper the guard who was holding Sophie? Bit confusing there...
11/24/2007 c3 Wry
Why does Ryan get a 'Fredrik I' after his name? Doesn't that just suck? Heh.
11/24/2007 c2 Wry
Well... Harriet is too bubbly and obsessed. Lol. Nice work so far.
11/24/2007 c1 Wry
Hehe. I really like this beginning =)

Btw, what does (Circled paragraphs) mean? Does it mean that Elliott circled all of them?

x Wry
11/24/2007 c28 lane
your story's the best one i've read so far...please update soon...

just wanna ask, is ben attracted to catherine? and is hailey a villain?
10/21/2007 c28 orchestralover
i really like your story!
9/12/2007 c1 21rosieroo
wow i absolutly LOVE THIS STORY! it so deserves more than 500 reveiws! It deserves about 50! far OUT! i hope u update soon!
8/28/2007 c28 5The Happy Carrot
Well! This was a welcome surprise... I hope in that big Imaginative, Creative head of yours, you are planning out another chapter. And it seems that if you do not produce another chapter... I will have to use that creepy Egyptian Vase my mom has to put the ashes of your cerimoniously burt Armadillo! DONT MAKE ME!

haha anyways

I miss you :)

haha
8/20/2007 c28 4caralene
I have to say: That was awesome. Great plot, your characters are very distinct and easy to remember. I was hooked! I also had a few friends check it out and now we're on the same boat.

Pure brilliance...
8/6/2007 c28 6naningxoxo
you know what... i was crying when i found out they died cuz avery and ray are awesome... also, i was crying since lee is being such an idiot! I'M SERIOUS! i wanted to knock some sense into her. I mean give him a chance, he deserves it... when i first found out that he cheated on her, i was like that bitch... and i'm one to hold grudges... but once he started being all tender and i could feel the emotions, i just flat out got hysterical when lee kept refusing him... DAMMIT I WANT TO SWEAR AND CUSS AND PRETTY MUCH MAKE LEE UNDERSTAND! FUCK FUCK FUCK! also, i can't wait until you update... hopefully it won't take a few more months... i'm really hoping it wont's since i stayed up until 7:02 am... since i haven't been reading fictionpress... dammit... this chapter is probably going to haunt my thoughts... dammit my mom's coming and my sister might wake up from my typing... gotta go!
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