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3/12/2007 c15 1Lil Bazza
*giggle* I love Sunrise. I watch it when I can (which is usually rarely due to school/uni/sleep...) but it's so funny. Mel and Koshi... ha ha ha...

I'll do a more of a review later but I love the story. I'm just reading til the end and I'll tell you everything.

I love Hamish and Andy... just saw that then. I prefer Hamish - he's so funny on Spicks and Specks. Hmm... Adam Hills... I'm such a loser.

Speak Later,

Jen
3/11/2007 c24 5Skeptic-Critic
Well don't I feel like an idiot now...I read this update the day you put it up...And for some reason unknown to me, I didn't review...I even read the responses...Because I remember thinking about Pride and prejudice after you mentioned it...Right so I'll just start at the beginning...

FINALLY! He finally gets that he likes her...Took him long enough...Now she needs to realize that she likes him...Or maybe she does already...I think she does...And can't let emotion get in the way of the job...I think that's it...But he finally gets it...And i'm ecstatic...

Scary booby trapped envelope...

That didn't really answer my question about the happy ending...Is it happy?

I love everything by Myrika...Have you read the two Reason and Romance stories? Those are good...

I love Pride and Prejudice...THis year in my lit class we get to read it and I'm so excited we finally get something interesting to read...Although they're making us read Great Expectations as well and I'm not so thrilled about that one...

I love Meg Cabot's stuff...What do Carly Phillips and Sophie Kinsella write?

Are you planning on killing any of the royal family before the stories through? I'm not asking about near deaths just do any of them die? And does Lee live to see the end of the story?
3/7/2007 c24 2pixie-girl-1231
Yay a double update I go on hoping for one update and I see two. Great job I love your story. Keep on writing and update soon!
3/6/2007 c24 1noriepie
Hey!

Belladonna. Can you tell me what that is? I love the sound of it. I read a book titled Belladonna about this woman and I thought it was just a name. It's an eyedrop? I'm curious now. haha

Oh yes, LOVELY story. Complicated though, I don't know how I would help her.
3/6/2007 c24 mimi
u noe, i knew this would happen... i expected it, but now that it happend i feel so sorry for Ryan, i just wanna give him a big hug at the same time smack him over the head...

i understand why Lee made the choices she did in this chapter and the avoidance in the last chatper... i can't wait to see what happens next! update soon again! i was so happy when i saw that you did 2 chappies.
3/4/2007 c24 1Twinkle Star Bell
I totally understand why Lee made the decision she did. I mean she has to consider her job or Ryan can end up dead. I think she made the right decision but will it turn out right in the end? Interesting letter. Can't wait for the next update. This story is getting more and more interesting by the chapters! I love love love it!
2/27/2007 c24 Inky-Angel
Alright! You updated... and it was a really long chapter, too. =D Nice. Thank God, Ryan FINALLY knows he likes her. =D
2/26/2007 c24 Alenor
heya, these are two really great chappies. i really can't wait for next one to see what the letter is. i'm gonna try and check my email regularly for updates on fictionpress stories but i'm at uni now and have started so i'm a bit busy with that and work so yeah, if i don't read for ages and ages and ages you know why. i got my first uni preference and i'm now a student of the ANU (australian national university) and moved into canberra about 2 weeks ago. it's been pretty good, so far i'm liking it so yeah. can't wait for more ~ Alenor.
2/25/2007 c23 5Skeptic-Critic
That was so well written that I felt awkward and on edge through the whole chapter...And kinda sad that Giselle had managed to come between them...
2/25/2007 c24 Ye
Yes! New chapter, actually double the chapters. I still can't believe Ry was desperate enough to go back to "it", yup she doesn't deserved to be referred to as human, but Lee and him are gonna be together, I know it. So glad that you updated. Hope another one comes soon and that Lee and Ry solves there probs. Good luck with the writing and can't wait to see what unfolds.
2/25/2007 c24 3Allison Smith
aw, sweets, you HAVE to forgive him. He's so cute. and he loves you
2/25/2007 c24 AliKitKat
Poor Ryan, he was a fool, but he loves her. Sophia remains very cute! And you gotta love Jasper and Matthew! Ooh, who wrote it?
2/24/2007 c24 Aragorn is mine
Hey

WOW these two chapters were amazing! So drama filled and Ryan the idiot finally realises he likes Lee! YAY! I can see why Lee doesn't agree but it will be fun to see what Ryan does to get her too. I mean he will try to win her over right? Hey why don't you introduce another guy into the mix and then he wants Lee and then Ryan gets insanely jealous? That would be so bloody hilarious! Anyways it's a REALLY good story and I can't wait till you update again... i'm actually procrastinating at the moment and homework awaits... hey NSW people aren't snobby... I am one of them and i don't think I'm better than say people in QUeensland... argh... my HSC's coming up... Like your VCE? Isn't that what it's called in Victoria... good luck with that =] Please please update soon! SOrry for randomness in review.
2/24/2007 c24 2EnchantedKorean
good chapter...i understand what lee is feeling, but i really wish she would come to terms with her OWN feelings...i liked conversation between jasper & lee...this chapter was well written..i liked how you described the moment where ryan realizes that he really truly likes lee...i can't wait till the next chapter!
2/24/2007 c23 EnchantedKorean
i like how you kind of set this chapter in a spectator POV...the events that are happening are not all described by the said person in action...i like it...and i liked how you set the tension in the story...good job!
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