for Save Me, Oh Brave Protector9/17/2006 c17 the-galaxy
Le gasp! A quick update. YAY! This was a great chapter. Kind of short, but it was cute. I'm sensing romance in the air. Ryan seems more likeable now and Lee is as awesome as ever.
Not a lot of spelling errors (I only found one ^_^) so YAY!
I'm so bored right now. Your story's my only entertainment. Gah... I can't wait until the next chapter. Hoorah for school holidays! You rule.
And your story rocks!
Le gasp! A quick update. YAY! This was a great chapter. Kind of short, but it was cute. I'm sensing romance in the air. Ryan seems more likeable now and Lee is as awesome as ever.
Not a lot of spelling errors (I only found one ^_^) so YAY!
I'm so bored right now. Your story's my only entertainment. Gah... I can't wait until the next chapter. Hoorah for school holidays! You rule.
And your story rocks!
9/17/2006 c17 
12Life Love Sanity
gasp! that was a horibly horribly mean! to give that excellent preview and then just like that *snap* you take away all the juicy things to come! *sobs dramatically*
hmm ooh well i have a paper i need to write anyways.
its lovely tho =]
and i think lee and ryan and cute =]
12Life Love Sanitygasp! that was a horibly horribly mean! to give that excellent preview and then just like that *snap* you take away all the juicy things to come! *sobs dramatically*
hmm ooh well i have a paper i need to write anyways.
its lovely tho =]
and i think lee and ryan and cute =]
9/17/2006 c17 kate
i love this story, please update sooner
i love this story, please update sooner
9/17/2006 c17 2EnchantedKorean
hey...nice chappy! some romance beginning to bloom between the two! yay! so sweet! i love it! i'm so happy that you updated soon! i'll be waiting for the next one!
2EnchantedKoreanhey...nice chappy! some romance beginning to bloom between the two! yay! so sweet! i love it! i'm so happy that you updated soon! i'll be waiting for the next one!
9/17/2006 c17 1chic rebel
ah, it was a quick update, yeah! it was wonderful and cute. and since you gave us the preview! they kissed? update soon!
1chic rebelah, it was a quick update, yeah! it was wonderful and cute. and since you gave us the preview! they kissed? update soon!
9/17/2006 c17 Aragorn is mine
it would be intolerably cruel of you to leave us with this 'preview' for heaps long. It was actually more like a cliffie... Well however GREAT this chapter may have been there is NO excuse for a delay in the next one so update NOW!
it would be intolerably cruel of you to leave us with this 'preview' for heaps long. It was actually more like a cliffie... Well however GREAT this chapter may have been there is NO excuse for a delay in the next one so update NOW!
9/17/2006 c17 city-gal7
OMG! i hate previews...ok i love them but now i wanna know what happend..the kiss! i cna't wait till next chappie, update soon! good story, i liked how it was realistic and ryan didnt fall in love with her during the dance or anything..or will he later on? the dance still hasn't finished! lol, yeah, i'm high
OMG! i hate previews...ok i love them but now i wanna know what happend..the kiss! i cna't wait till next chappie, update soon! good story, i liked how it was realistic and ryan didnt fall in love with her during the dance or anything..or will he later on? the dance still hasn't finished! lol, yeah, i'm high
9/17/2006 c17 17angels and effects
Okay, I used to think military stories were boring, but then... ARRGH! Why didn't I see this story before? Not that it's a fully military story... bleh, what am I talking about. Ryan's name has all my favourite guys' names in there, AND he's cute. Bonus! The only thing is that it took really long to get to the part where Lee starts to guard Ryan. I liked that Chem joke! And I'm having a Chem test next week. Haha... hey, Ryan and Lee are starting to warm up nicely to each other. Am I supposed to call him Ryan or Nicholas? A little confusing... I like the way you start off all your chapters. Like this one, it's very creative. The whole idea of this story is really imaginative as a whole, makes it a good break from other stories.
Great work with this! I loved the preview to the next chapter, seems like THEY KISS. Ooh. DON'T LEAVE IT THERE! Update soon! (oh, your grammar's great, there's no problem with it. It's a lot better than other stories I've read!)
17angels and effectsOkay, I used to think military stories were boring, but then... ARRGH! Why didn't I see this story before? Not that it's a fully military story... bleh, what am I talking about. Ryan's name has all my favourite guys' names in there, AND he's cute. Bonus! The only thing is that it took really long to get to the part where Lee starts to guard Ryan. I liked that Chem joke! And I'm having a Chem test next week. Haha... hey, Ryan and Lee are starting to warm up nicely to each other. Am I supposed to call him Ryan or Nicholas? A little confusing... I like the way you start off all your chapters. Like this one, it's very creative. The whole idea of this story is really imaginative as a whole, makes it a good break from other stories.
Great work with this! I loved the preview to the next chapter, seems like THEY KISS. Ooh. DON'T LEAVE IT THERE! Update soon! (oh, your grammar's great, there's no problem with it. It's a lot better than other stories I've read!)
9/17/2006 c17 Alenor
heya, this is a great chappie. i can't wait for next chappie to see the kiss, and the reason for the bruise. btw, people who don't get their homework done? lol, i should join that category, although i'm procrastinating on my HSC study (my bad). cya later ~ Alenor.
heya, this is a great chappie. i can't wait for next chappie to see the kiss, and the reason for the bruise. btw, people who don't get their homework done? lol, i should join that category, although i'm procrastinating on my HSC study (my bad). cya later ~ Alenor.
9/16/2006 c17 6naningxoxo
well i'll be damned! you actually made something happen between the two! it's a first time for everything i guess they always say! maybe you'll tell me more about the kiss because i think i missed something! well i just can't wait until u update soon because i'm getting really excited! you know what you should do? there should be another guy trying to steal her away from the prince. you know it could happen! maybe she will actually get to end up with him! omg...omg... omg... i sound like one of those ditzy girls! damn i'm writing too much! i hope you update soon and give a response to this message because i love getting response from writers!
6naningxoxowell i'll be damned! you actually made something happen between the two! it's a first time for everything i guess they always say! maybe you'll tell me more about the kiss because i think i missed something! well i just can't wait until u update soon because i'm getting really excited! you know what you should do? there should be another guy trying to steal her away from the prince. you know it could happen! maybe she will actually get to end up with him! omg...omg... omg... i sound like one of those ditzy girls! damn i'm writing too much! i hope you update soon and give a response to this message because i love getting response from writers!
9/16/2006 c17 3funkyfiction
Well well well, what can i say? Fantastic chapter, you cracked me up with the chem joke! i cant believe you put it in, but it worked really well! You know you have set a standard for yourself now, right? We (your readers) all expect another chapter out BEFORE the holidays are over. That gives you 2 weeks to get writing! So go for it!
PS; dont worry, i'll keep you motivated - Just expect mass emails!
3funkyfictionWell well well, what can i say? Fantastic chapter, you cracked me up with the chem joke! i cant believe you put it in, but it worked really well! You know you have set a standard for yourself now, right? We (your readers) all expect another chapter out BEFORE the holidays are over. That gives you 2 weeks to get writing! So go for it!
PS; dont worry, i'll keep you motivated - Just expect mass emails!
9/16/2006 c17 2Heartless Writer
Another update - awesome =)I must say this chapter was.. lovely!Though I feel you're skipping out on the details there... that little break I think made it a little weird. I thought you were ending the chapter, but not? A little confused, but I still liked it very much.Can't wait for the next update. Any updates for Tennis Ace in the future?
2Heartless WriterAnother update - awesome =)I must say this chapter was.. lovely!Though I feel you're skipping out on the details there... that little break I think made it a little weird. I thought you were ending the chapter, but not? A little confused, but I still liked it very much.Can't wait for the next update. Any updates for Tennis Ace in the future?
9/16/2006 c16 2StrawberryStarburst
Great story, great characters, great author. :) This story has life and that's what I love most. It's got me hooked. I also like how you show different sides to the characters. I think stories are clever where the characters' personlities seem more natural-like what you're doing. So keep updating!
2StrawberryStarburstGreat story, great characters, great author. :) This story has life and that's what I love most. It's got me hooked. I also like how you show different sides to the characters. I think stories are clever where the characters' personlities seem more natural-like what you're doing. So keep updating!