for Save Me, Oh Brave Protector5/18/2006 c15 
13Tenshistar
I try. Usually i get stuck on Celtic names, but thanks for the compliment and i can't wait for the next update.
13TenshistarI try. Usually i get stuck on Celtic names, but thanks for the compliment and i can't wait for the next update.
5/14/2006 c14 Cooties
Aw, this is so cute! I love it! Lee is awesome and I LOVE Ben! Will we see him more? I like Ryan, but I want Ben and Lee! Hehe. He is such a cutie. I love this so far, I love Avery and Rachel, too! They are awesome! This is so good! Please update soon!
Aw, this is so cute! I love it! Lee is awesome and I LOVE Ben! Will we see him more? I like Ryan, but I want Ben and Lee! Hehe. He is such a cutie. I love this so far, I love Avery and Rachel, too! They are awesome! This is so good! Please update soon!
5/2/2006 c14 schweet
i think this is a really really cool story. i like it a LOT. update soon!
i think this is a really really cool story. i like it a LOT. update soon!
4/22/2006 c14 the-galaxy
Hmm... Interesting story you have here. Though there's not that much romance in it, its still a good read. There are some grammar and spelling errors, but its tolerable. I love the story line and I really hope you update soon.
Hmm... Interesting story you have here. Though there's not that much romance in it, its still a good read. There are some grammar and spelling errors, but its tolerable. I love the story line and I really hope you update soon.
4/22/2006 c14 rain-walker
Very nice, very nice, love the way you have slowly merged things not so cliche like most!
rain-walker
Very nice, very nice, love the way you have slowly merged things not so cliche like most!
rain-walker
4/21/2006 c14 6Ginne
I've really enjoyed the story! I skipped past the summary many times when surfing through the romance section but today i just decided to try it. I don't read stories about princes and princesses, but the summary seemed as though it is not a story set in the past (i really don't read those. ever.) so needless to say i am very glad with the way this is set in the present yet still uses imagination. Out of curiosity, where do you live? I'm in Canada and my guess for you is Australia b/c your main character and her family are from there. I am a big fan and this is definetely a favourite story of mine! It's very creative and origional (despite some clichés). And I like the Elizabeth/Mr. Darcy relationship that is starting here! I absolutely love the hate turned love stories!
Anxious to keep reading,
-Ginne
6GinneI've really enjoyed the story! I skipped past the summary many times when surfing through the romance section but today i just decided to try it. I don't read stories about princes and princesses, but the summary seemed as though it is not a story set in the past (i really don't read those. ever.) so needless to say i am very glad with the way this is set in the present yet still uses imagination. Out of curiosity, where do you live? I'm in Canada and my guess for you is Australia b/c your main character and her family are from there. I am a big fan and this is definetely a favourite story of mine! It's very creative and origional (despite some clichés). And I like the Elizabeth/Mr. Darcy relationship that is starting here! I absolutely love the hate turned love stories!
Anxious to keep reading,
-Ginne
4/21/2006 c9 Ginne
Yay! I really like this story so far! It's not anything like i expected! I'm liking the way Lee isn't the first guard. Third time's a charm, right :P I'm going to keep reading and I'll review again after chapter 14 (the last one up to date)
-Ginne
Yay! I really like this story so far! It's not anything like i expected! I'm liking the way Lee isn't the first guard. Third time's a charm, right :P I'm going to keep reading and I'll review again after chapter 14 (the last one up to date)
-Ginne
4/19/2006 c14 7lilxseeker
o0o0o ball! hehe the whole lee and ryan conversations seem really real, like at the end when he asked her to the ball! is that preplanned? ANYWAYS update SOON!
7lilxseekero0o0o ball! hehe the whole lee and ryan conversations seem really real, like at the end when he asked her to the ball! is that preplanned? ANYWAYS update SOON!
4/19/2006 c14 2Heartless Writer
I must apologize. I read this as soon as I got the email, but I haven't had enough time to write a lengthy review yet. And I still don't. I do apologize.
So I'll keep it short. I had to readjust because I couldnt pinpoint exactly where the last chapter left off, so it took me awhile to realize.. "oh yeahh.. this is happenning!" I thought it was well written though. =)
That's sure some good script writing those people who wrote your two main characters scripts did ;) Either than or they're both really good actors. I guess I'll have to wait and see if it was all acting now don't I?
Keep it up. =) And a dozen hugs, only two are needed. But the other ten are greatly appricated. =)
2Heartless WriterI must apologize. I read this as soon as I got the email, but I haven't had enough time to write a lengthy review yet. And I still don't. I do apologize.
So I'll keep it short. I had to readjust because I couldnt pinpoint exactly where the last chapter left off, so it took me awhile to realize.. "oh yeahh.. this is happenning!" I thought it was well written though. =)
That's sure some good script writing those people who wrote your two main characters scripts did ;) Either than or they're both really good actors. I guess I'll have to wait and see if it was all acting now don't I?
Keep it up. =) And a dozen hugs, only two are needed. But the other ten are greatly appricated. =)
4/18/2006 c14 5Dirty White Belt
Lighting the spark in your day?Darling there was a flame as big as a dinosaurous.I loved this one.Of course that was to be expected...Because you are such a wonderful writer.Can't wait til the next chapter!
5Dirty White BeltLighting the spark in your day?Darling there was a flame as big as a dinosaurous.I loved this one.Of course that was to be expected...Because you are such a wonderful writer.Can't wait til the next chapter!
4/17/2006 c14 6Pandemonium Express
YAY, AN UPDATE! ahem...er...hi again! hehe. I would say you're awesome, but I'm pretty sure I've already said that a million times over (actually, I just wrote it anyways-hah! _ ).Ah! Thank goodness Lee's not blond! I had this image of her transforming entirely into one of those cute girls with straight blond hair who look really shy, and...erm...nothing against that type of person (actually, that's kind of what my best friend in elementary school looked like-so sweet!), but that's just...not Lee. It didn't suit her very well and I was a little buggered. Good to know I was wrong! XD
HAHAHA, reading your own work is always painful. I like to read my own stuff to see what I can fix or if I can pick up where I left off, but...oy. It's also so painful. _ Nothing's ever any good! sigh. But your writing's wonderful! I don't even notice the words at all when I'm reading because I'm wrapped up in the story-that's always a good sign. When people start noticing the structure of your writing instead of the plotline, you know you're in trouble, but you're far from that point. Till next time (as always, can't wait to read more)!
6Pandemonium ExpressYAY, AN UPDATE! ahem...er...hi again! hehe. I would say you're awesome, but I'm pretty sure I've already said that a million times over (actually, I just wrote it anyways-hah! _ ).Ah! Thank goodness Lee's not blond! I had this image of her transforming entirely into one of those cute girls with straight blond hair who look really shy, and...erm...nothing against that type of person (actually, that's kind of what my best friend in elementary school looked like-so sweet!), but that's just...not Lee. It didn't suit her very well and I was a little buggered. Good to know I was wrong! XD
HAHAHA, reading your own work is always painful. I like to read my own stuff to see what I can fix or if I can pick up where I left off, but...oy. It's also so painful. _ Nothing's ever any good! sigh. But your writing's wonderful! I don't even notice the words at all when I'm reading because I'm wrapped up in the story-that's always a good sign. When people start noticing the structure of your writing instead of the plotline, you know you're in trouble, but you're far from that point. Till next time (as always, can't wait to read more)!
4/17/2006 c14 3Miss Meticulous
This is a great story so far. And thank you for having a clean draft (no spelling errors, etc.) posted, I haven't read much lately because I have gotten too frustrated with not being able to read through a single sentance clearly. Okay, rant's over. Once again, this is rather solid so far. Update soon!
3Miss MeticulousThis is a great story so far. And thank you for having a clean draft (no spelling errors, etc.) posted, I haven't read much lately because I have gotten too frustrated with not being able to read through a single sentance clearly. Okay, rant's over. Once again, this is rather solid so far. Update soon!
4/17/2006 c14 jero
I just discovered this story and I think it's really really good! Great writing style and I really love the way you established the main characters first before having them meet each other. Great work! Update soon!
I just discovered this story and I think it's really really good! Great writing style and I really love the way you established the main characters first before having them meet each other. Great work! Update soon!
4/17/2006 c14 ms. fuzzy
YOUR STORY ROCKS! its so nice and action packed and stuff...yes, stuff. so ya...i cant wait till the next chapter comes out!
YOUR STORY ROCKS! its so nice and action packed and stuff...yes, stuff. so ya...i cant wait till the next chapter comes out!