12/19/2005 c1 14kit feral
"Watching the stars make way for " I get a really pretty image from this. I love the night, stars, moon- and this poem. It's beautiful, really does her justice. Wonderful work, keep it up.
"Watching the stars make way for " I get a really pretty image from this. I love the night, stars, moon- and this poem. It's beautiful, really does her justice. Wonderful work, keep it up.
10/27/2005 c1 Aidos Nemesis
I love your imagery; you make it possible to see that door in the night sky opening to reveal the moon. Keep up the good work!
I love your imagery; you make it possible to see that door in the night sky opening to reveal the moon. Keep up the good work!
6/20/2005 c1 14Scales of Sapphire
Love your imagery and metaphors. I love night time... Happy Writing!
Love your imagery and metaphors. I love night time... Happy Writing!
5/28/2005 c1 69this is britt
this made me yearn for warm nights so I could just stare at the moon again. wonderfully done- not overstated at all.
this made me yearn for warm nights so I could just stare at the moon again. wonderfully done- not overstated at all.
5/14/2005 c1 Edraith
Really beautiful, you create a lot of atmosphere with a few lines. The poem reminded me of Keats. Lovely.
Really beautiful, you create a lot of atmosphere with a few lines. The poem reminded me of Keats. Lovely.
4/18/2005 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Mozart's diva—moon,
Queen of the night ringing out,—
In the Magic Flute.
—From a dream obscured,
Came Selene to soothe my woes,
Soft, silver, singing.
—She's gone to bed now,
Coverlets of white down clouds,
Took the stars with her.
—¿How can I love Her?
Nightly She flirts with tall stars,—
Her face—radiant.
Mozart's diva—moon,
Queen of the night ringing out,—
In the Magic Flute.
—From a dream obscured,
Came Selene to soothe my woes,
Soft, silver, singing.
—She's gone to bed now,
Coverlets of white down clouds,
Took the stars with her.
—¿How can I love Her?
Nightly She flirts with tall stars,—
Her face—radiant.
4/17/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
This is very nice. Like the imgery and metaphors. (I have a metaphoric poem on night too, only the moon is the king in mine). anyway, good job.
This is very nice. Like the imgery and metaphors. (I have a metaphoric poem on night too, only the moon is the king in mine). anyway, good job.