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12/19/2005 c1 14kit feral
"Watching the stars make way for " I get a really pretty image from this. I love the night, stars, moon- and this poem. It's beautiful, really does her justice. Wonderful work, keep it up.
12/19/2005 c1 Herminia
An excellent way to describe the moon.
10/27/2005 c1 Aidos Nemesis
I love your imagery; you make it possible to see that door in the night sky opening to reveal the moon. Keep up the good work!
6/20/2005 c1 14Scales of Sapphire
Love your imagery and metaphors. I love night time... Happy Writing!
6/4/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
lovely!
5/31/2005 c1 catseyeview
again, beautiful...
5/28/2005 c1 69this is britt
this made me yearn for warm nights so I could just stare at the moon again. wonderfully done- not overstated at all.
5/25/2005 c1 Silence the Storm
Wonderful. Beautiful, short and sweet. Perfect work.
5/14/2005 c1 Edraith
Really beautiful, you create a lot of atmosphere with a few lines. The poem reminded me of Keats. Lovely.
4/19/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
beautiful
4/18/2005 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Mozart's diva—moon,

Queen of the night ringing out,—

In the Magic Flute.

—From a dream obscured,

Came Selene to soothe my woes,

Soft, silver, singing.

—She's gone to bed now,

Coverlets of white down clouds,

Took the stars with her.

—¿How can I love Her?

Nightly She flirts with tall stars,—

Her face—radiant.
4/17/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
This is very nice. Like the imgery and metaphors. (I have a metaphoric poem on night too, only the moon is the king in mine). anyway, good job.
4/16/2005 c1 75lime215
perfect immagry of the moon.
4/15/2005 c1 47Kenishiro
I have to say, though the poem was a simple one, yet it was beautifully written, love it, cheers to the good work, keep it up!

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