for Dreaming12/26/2005 c1 
63Affinity
Great imagery, my only problem was that it doesn't seem to flow as well as it could. Still a wonderful poem though. Greath job!
63AffinityGreat imagery, my only problem was that it doesn't seem to flow as well as it could. Still a wonderful poem though. Greath job!
8/29/2005 c1 32LemonFlats
Oh.
The whole thing is beautiful imagery... There's no way I could select just one line.
Sometimes when you cut the lines, it seemed a bit awkward ("Where butterflies flitter between pastel petals – where / Open grass gives way to angelic, sleeping woods and").
Anyway, it's so peaceful and... dreamy. Wonderfully descriptive. Well done =)
32LemonFlatsOh.
The whole thing is beautiful imagery... There's no way I could select just one line.
Sometimes when you cut the lines, it seemed a bit awkward ("Where butterflies flitter between pastel petals – where / Open grass gives way to angelic, sleeping woods and").
Anyway, it's so peaceful and... dreamy. Wonderfully descriptive. Well done =)
8/13/2005 c1 winter's requiem
I really love the imagery you used here - it's serene, yet you can feel the underlying power of nature, which I suppose is analogous to the power of friendship :). I also want to thank you for all the reviews you've given me; to be complimented by such a talented poet/writer as yourself is a great honor. ^_^
I really love the imagery you used here - it's serene, yet you can feel the underlying power of nature, which I suppose is analogous to the power of friendship :). I also want to thank you for all the reviews you've given me; to be complimented by such a talented poet/writer as yourself is a great honor. ^_^
8/12/2005 c1 Shannon Marie Mulloy
a) amazing imagery here, i love it. b) thank you for the nice comment!
a) amazing imagery here, i love it. b) thank you for the nice comment!
8/8/2005 c1 3Demon with Angel Wings
you did a wonderful job. Its light and relaxing. There is almost something mystical and whimsical to it. I personally believe that nature has healing abilities and you captured that a little.
3Demon with Angel Wingsyou did a wonderful job. Its light and relaxing. There is almost something mystical and whimsical to it. I personally believe that nature has healing abilities and you captured that a little.
8/8/2005 c1 11Malicena Tzorcelan
Beautiful piece of work. I like the last piece about the mountains best.Your writing is wonderful keep it up!Malicena Tzorcelan
11Malicena TzorcelanBeautiful piece of work. I like the last piece about the mountains best.Your writing is wonderful keep it up!Malicena Tzorcelan
8/4/2005 c1 Sheree Polhill-Smith
This is one of the most beautiful poems. I like this more than your angsty works, but that's because angst gets me down, not because they're crap :)
This is one of the most beautiful poems. I like this more than your angsty works, but that's because angst gets me down, not because they're crap :)
7/21/2005 c1 Marinna
Beautiful, absolutely wonderful. I love all of your descriptions, it really is supurb. Awesome work
Beautiful, absolutely wonderful. I love all of your descriptions, it really is supurb. Awesome work