for Shallow Water, Little Rock4/17/2005 c1 
116loversdream17
imagery usage was fantastic can't wait to read anf review the rest of your work when i get the time. keep up the good work.love always and forever mandi
116loversdream17imagery usage was fantastic can't wait to read anf review the rest of your work when i get the time. keep up the good work.love always and forever mandi
4/17/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Very original. I love it and the imagery was something amazing. The poem has an amazing flow.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserVery original. I love it and the imagery was something amazing. The poem has an amazing flow.
Keep it up.
4/17/2005 c1 126swift sky silver
very nicely written... it makes me want to read it over to see if i got the full meaning =0)
126swift sky silververy nicely written... it makes me want to read it over to see if i got the full meaning =0)
4/16/2005 c1 21Zephyr Zaelza
the imagery you used was great, I really like this one, I can't wait to read more of your stuff :) Keep it up!
-Zephyr Zaelza
21Zephyr Zaelzathe imagery you used was great, I really like this one, I can't wait to read more of your stuff :) Keep it up!
-Zephyr Zaelza
4/16/2005 c1 Tigerlily96
I really liked this poem. Thanks for the great read!
Sarah
I really liked this poem. Thanks for the great read!
Sarah
4/16/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
interesting poem, ur 'little rock' and 'shallow water' sound like characters with their own perseonalities in ur poem. very original and different.keep up the great work!
11Cloud Burstinteresting poem, ur 'little rock' and 'shallow water' sound like characters with their own perseonalities in ur poem. very original and different.keep up the great work!