for Shimmer115's poetry collection1/14/2006 c2 
73fading innocence
Thanks for reviewing my poem! *gapes* You have so many reviews...WAAH! Is it me or do people not like rhyming poems these days?
Anyway, great poems!
73fading innocenceThanks for reviewing my poem! *gapes* You have so many reviews...WAAH! Is it me or do people not like rhyming poems these days?
Anyway, great poems!
12/26/2005 c9 133Dying Rose
Very sweet. :) I like it, you did a good job of portraying the emotion behind the "together"ness. :)
133Dying RoseVery sweet. :) I like it, you did a good job of portraying the emotion behind the "together"ness. :)
12/26/2005 c5 Dying Rose
I like this one a lot, it reminds me of some of my poetry! I like the last part especially. :)One thing you might want to do is fix the typos before you post them up, makes your writing easier to read and understand. :)
I like this one a lot, it reminds me of some of my poetry! I like the last part especially. :)One thing you might want to do is fix the typos before you post them up, makes your writing easier to read and understand. :)
11/11/2005 c10 1St. REM
A wonderful collection of poems. I loved all of them. I thought 'Watching you out of the side of you eye' was particularly good.I really like your style of poetry, it's so short and poweful and punchy.
1St. REMA wonderful collection of poems. I loved all of them. I thought 'Watching you out of the side of you eye' was particularly good.I really like your style of poetry, it's so short and poweful and punchy.
11/10/2005 c5 Miss-Nina
Gorgeos, but short and sweet. Long poems can be really dull. But this one is super nice! Luv it. Not as cheeful, but still loved.
nina-chan
Gorgeos, but short and sweet. Long poems can be really dull. But this one is super nice! Luv it. Not as cheeful, but still loved.
nina-chan
11/10/2005 c4 Miss-Nina
I love how it rhyms. It really paints a picture in your mind. Excellente!
nina-chan
I love how it rhyms. It really paints a picture in your mind. Excellente!
nina-chan
11/10/2005 c3 Miss-Nina
I really like your poems. They cheer me up and stuff. Maybe you should think about getting a poetry book published...?
nina-chan
I really like your poems. They cheer me up and stuff. Maybe you should think about getting a poetry book published...?
nina-chan
11/10/2005 c2 Miss-Nina
Another pretty addition to your collection! I like this. Your poems have great meanings.
nina-chan
Oh, that makes you realize. I have a poem collection, too!
Another pretty addition to your collection! I like this. Your poems have great meanings.
nina-chan
Oh, that makes you realize. I have a poem collection, too!
11/10/2005 c1 Miss-Nina
Beautiful! It's short and pretty, like a poem should be. I think you have great talent, Shimmer!
If you don't recognize my name, I'm Miss-Nina. You reviewed my story UDA United Dragon Agency long ago. I wanted to keep in touch.
nina-chan
Beautiful! It's short and pretty, like a poem should be. I think you have great talent, Shimmer!
If you don't recognize my name, I'm Miss-Nina. You reviewed my story UDA United Dragon Agency long ago. I wanted to keep in touch.
nina-chan
8/16/2005 c2 newby6320
These are two really great poems! I like the way you make both scenes seem as though they are happening around you.
These are two really great poems! I like the way you make both scenes seem as though they are happening around you.
7/16/2005 c10 44Amara the Warrior
All in all...not bad. It could use a lot of improvement though. I liked your poems though:)
44Amara the WarriorAll in all...not bad. It could use a lot of improvement though. I liked your poems though:)
7/16/2005 c9 Amara the Warrior
Hmm...I don't know how to say this but you need to balance out your poems. It's kinda hard to explain.
Hmm...I don't know how to say this but you need to balance out your poems. It's kinda hard to explain.
7/16/2005 c7 Amara the Warrior
Well...you have some grammer errors but it WAS pretty good. Keep writing girl!
Well...you have some grammer errors but it WAS pretty good. Keep writing girl!
7/16/2005 c6 Amara the Warrior
I think that dreams are ways in which we escape reality. But...that's just me:) Good job.
I think that dreams are ways in which we escape reality. But...that's just me:) Good job.