for Strands of Floating Silver4/27/2005 c1 addie pray
Beautiful. Seemed almost...ah, I don't know what I'm saying. I was envisioning a demon-type thing more than a spider. Eh. Demons, spiders, it's all relative. Good poem.
Beautiful. Seemed almost...ah, I don't know what I'm saying. I was envisioning a demon-type thing more than a spider. Eh. Demons, spiders, it's all relative. Good poem.
4/21/2005 c1 
28Spector'sGirl
thats really neat - how you could percieve and describe such beauty in something most would brush right by
28Spector'sGirlthats really neat - how you could percieve and describe such beauty in something most would brush right by
4/21/2005 c1 32The Blind Guardian
Also a good one, though I have precious little to really say about it. The red glow would have been interesting to witness.
32The Blind GuardianAlso a good one, though I have precious little to really say about it. The red glow would have been interesting to witness.
4/18/2005 c1 His Only
Ooh! Wow that was interesting. You described everything so well- although I did not inision a spider *shiver*. Excellent work with this. The realism was great! Keep it up.
Also I want to thank you for your review on my poem. Aww you had such nice things to say! Thanks again and God Bless!
Ooh! Wow that was interesting. You described everything so well- although I did not inision a spider *shiver*. Excellent work with this. The realism was great! Keep it up.
Also I want to thank you for your review on my poem. Aww you had such nice things to say! Thanks again and God Bless!
4/18/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
simple words, yet they paint such brilliance. =)
u sure the spider wasnt a black widow? lol just checking.
11Cloud Burstsimple words, yet they paint such brilliance. =)
u sure the spider wasnt a black widow? lol just checking.
4/18/2005 c1 David Stephen
Hello! Thank you exceedingly for my review - this poem is so beautiful. I love it - you caught a simple image of normality and turned it into a magical piece of writing, with a calm and tranquil feel to it. I love the title, and the way it is infused within the poem - the description is so simple and so beautiful - this really is a gorgeous poem, a snapshot of a beautiful image, encased in these elegant words. Definitely one for my favourite list! Well done! ~DS~
Hello! Thank you exceedingly for my review - this poem is so beautiful. I love it - you caught a simple image of normality and turned it into a magical piece of writing, with a calm and tranquil feel to it. I love the title, and the way it is infused within the poem - the description is so simple and so beautiful - this really is a gorgeous poem, a snapshot of a beautiful image, encased in these elegant words. Definitely one for my favourite list! Well done! ~DS~