for 101 Uses For A Dead Catobleepas9/7/2007 c9 Friggin Awesome
Lvoing it so far, so you better update...If you don't I will hunt you down, and murder your brothers and sisters...if you have none, your parents are next...Just kidding...anyway, nice story, would love it if you could update.
Friggin Awesome
Lvoing it so far, so you better update...If you don't I will hunt you down, and murder your brothers and sisters...if you have none, your parents are next...Just kidding...anyway, nice story, would love it if you could update.
Friggin Awesome
9/5/2007 c1 Friggin Awesome
Brilliant...Would love to read more...I will a little later, I have no time now. Good story
Friggin Awesome
Brilliant...Would love to read more...I will a little later, I have no time now. Good story
Friggin Awesome
9/12/2006 c9 
2Khiolis
hilarious stuff! Especially Daria and Erek! Is the guy cursed or what? When will u post more? i want to know what'll happen next!
2Khiolishilarious stuff! Especially Daria and Erek! Is the guy cursed or what? When will u post more? i want to know what'll happen next!
6/12/2006 c9 warnthepenguins
A lot of potential. I'm a sucker for coherent explanations for magical phenomena, and I like your repetition-influenced world. The Henchman's Guild is very clever, a good turn to take the often-cliched genre of fantasy-cliche-bashing. Isn't it odd that stories mocking cliches mock them so uniformly that they grow dull themselves?
That's the reason I dislike Daria and the whole Theive's Guild. It's the same old cliche presented in the same way - with the additional layer of cliche brought in by the Dungeons-and-Dragons-style "what should I put in the Phobias box?"
The narrator's voice is strong, confident, and often witty, but too modern for me. Tharan is a great concept and a good character, but his dialogue makes him a one-note running joke. Not even the most bookish dolts in today's world talk in his needlessly prolix style. It would be far easier to swallow if Tharan were *sharp* - not just presented as a man who spends his long evenings reading the thesaurus.
A lot of potential. I'm a sucker for coherent explanations for magical phenomena, and I like your repetition-influenced world. The Henchman's Guild is very clever, a good turn to take the often-cliched genre of fantasy-cliche-bashing. Isn't it odd that stories mocking cliches mock them so uniformly that they grow dull themselves?
That's the reason I dislike Daria and the whole Theive's Guild. It's the same old cliche presented in the same way - with the additional layer of cliche brought in by the Dungeons-and-Dragons-style "what should I put in the Phobias box?"
The narrator's voice is strong, confident, and often witty, but too modern for me. Tharan is a great concept and a good character, but his dialogue makes him a one-note running joke. Not even the most bookish dolts in today's world talk in his needlessly prolix style. It would be far easier to swallow if Tharan were *sharp* - not just presented as a man who spends his long evenings reading the thesaurus.
5/12/2006 c9 13Manna Banana
I forget if I ever reviewed this, but I read it a long time ago and you still have not updated. Did you quit this story or something?
13Manna BananaI forget if I ever reviewed this, but I read it a long time ago and you still have not updated. Did you quit this story or something?
11/29/2005 c1 9Reda
Ah the irony! The chapter title and the chapter is full of the "things that always happen" yet you end it nicely with two secrets that make this pair quite special. Ironic, indeed.
9RedaAh the irony! The chapter title and the chapter is full of the "things that always happen" yet you end it nicely with two secrets that make this pair quite special. Ironic, indeed.
11/12/2005 c8 2temblance
Aryn is so cool! In fantasy stories you really don't see much science being put to use (EVERYone uses magic to solve problems) so it's cool to see that he actually helped out by using a compass (that's what a direction finder is, right?). I liked hearing about that. once again, you are turning stereotypes upside down!
2temblanceAryn is so cool! In fantasy stories you really don't see much science being put to use (EVERYone uses magic to solve problems) so it's cool to see that he actually helped out by using a compass (that's what a direction finder is, right?). I liked hearing about that. once again, you are turning stereotypes upside down!
9/24/2005 c7 2temblance
Daria is so funny, being afraid of everything like that. All of your characters have something unusual about them, and that's why I really like this story. Good job.
2temblanceDaria is so funny, being afraid of everything like that. All of your characters have something unusual about them, and that's why I really like this story. Good job.
9/18/2005 c6 temblance
"I suppose there was an exhilarating element to the suspension of my higher brain function"
lol...a hero talking like that...
I think it was good that you made Daria discover her real identity, now she'll have someone to talk to. Anyway, I have some homework to do now, but I'll be back soon.
"I suppose there was an exhilarating element to the suspension of my higher brain function"
lol...a hero talking like that...
I think it was good that you made Daria discover her real identity, now she'll have someone to talk to. Anyway, I have some homework to do now, but I'll be back soon.
9/18/2005 c5 temblance
I loved the bit about Daria being afraid of heights, and the riding part. You're really good at altering the stereotypical view of characters.
I loved the bit about Daria being afraid of heights, and the riding part. You're really good at altering the stereotypical view of characters.
9/18/2005 c4 temblance
I'm so sorry that I haven't been back sooner...I need to start making use of author alert or something...somehow I this story just slipped my mind.
Anyway, I'm still here, and I still really like it.
I'm so sorry that I haven't been back sooner...I need to start making use of author alert or something...somehow I this story just slipped my mind.
Anyway, I'm still here, and I still really like it.
9/14/2005 c9 1Flying With Fish
w00T! This is great! It's so original and refreshing! thank you! thank you so very much! (for the great entertainment) Rock on!
1Flying With Fishw00T! This is great! It's so original and refreshing! thank you! thank you so very much! (for the great entertainment) Rock on!
9/13/2005 c1 Flying With Fish
WOAH! This is great! This is the most original story that I've read in the last six months! ROCK ON! w00T! (escuse me for the excessive enthusiasm...)
WOAH! This is great! This is the most original story that I've read in the last six months! ROCK ON! w00T! (escuse me for the excessive enthusiasm...)