
8/14/2005 c6
2Casey Drake
now... to answer the review, i meant a different voice for each character. it's fun. for instance, Tharan speaks a bit slowly and, of course, has a rather deep voice. in my mind at least... and jeka/jake talks fast. especially when near a Guild member.
*shrug* it's a good way to tell if a story is descriptive, if you can imagine the characters and do the voices.
:) CD

now... to answer the review, i meant a different voice for each character. it's fun. for instance, Tharan speaks a bit slowly and, of course, has a rather deep voice. in my mind at least... and jeka/jake talks fast. especially when near a Guild member.
*shrug* it's a good way to tell if a story is descriptive, if you can imagine the characters and do the voices.
:) CD
7/27/2005 c4 Casey Drake
yay! a place where i can review. I love this story. It's midnight here and I'm bored, so I was reading out the first chapter with different voices and everything.
Like I said. I was bored. At any rate, I love this story. I'm repeating myself, but oh well. It's late, and I feel like it.
Please update this as soon as possible. this is hilarious!
(and if you aren't going to publish Wind of the Soul, you can publish this one instead.)
:D CD
yay! a place where i can review. I love this story. It's midnight here and I'm bored, so I was reading out the first chapter with different voices and everything.
Like I said. I was bored. At any rate, I love this story. I'm repeating myself, but oh well. It's late, and I feel like it.
Please update this as soon as possible. this is hilarious!
(and if you aren't going to publish Wind of the Soul, you can publish this one instead.)
:D CD
7/24/2005 c3
2temblance
aww, the cute guy owes her a life-debt...
well, what can I say? I really like it. You really make Tharan sound intelligent, and it was cool how she made comparisons to Berek "he never interrupted me when I was doing business". The Guild seems like a nasty regulating place.

aww, the cute guy owes her a life-debt...
well, what can I say? I really like it. You really make Tharan sound intelligent, and it was cool how she made comparisons to Berek "he never interrupted me when I was doing business". The Guild seems like a nasty regulating place.
7/22/2005 c9
2wickedstarr42
lol, i've had days like that... haha. cool cool. its movin faster than some of ur other stuff. *shrug* dunno, i wasnt quite as impressed by this chapter. still, i'm sure it'll smooth out beautifully, they always seem to. keep up the goods dahlin. i think that might b all i got in the way of reading today. i'll catch up on arcana soon tho. l8r chick! kiss kiss!

lol, i've had days like that... haha. cool cool. its movin faster than some of ur other stuff. *shrug* dunno, i wasnt quite as impressed by this chapter. still, i'm sure it'll smooth out beautifully, they always seem to. keep up the goods dahlin. i think that might b all i got in the way of reading today. i'll catch up on arcana soon tho. l8r chick! kiss kiss!
7/20/2005 c9
1muffers-person
Ha, wow. This is such a wonderfully intellectual and amusing story. I'm quite fond of it. Erek is really starting to grow on me. I think I'd like to have a friend like that. Sounds like a pleasant individual, he does. :D
Well, at the beginning, I was a little confused. All the sudden revelations about the weirdness around them seemed too unexpected for me, but I think that's because I haven't read this story since the last time you updated, so my memory was a little rusty. Wow, bad sentence. Anyways, good job. I look forward to more.

Ha, wow. This is such a wonderfully intellectual and amusing story. I'm quite fond of it. Erek is really starting to grow on me. I think I'd like to have a friend like that. Sounds like a pleasant individual, he does. :D
Well, at the beginning, I was a little confused. All the sudden revelations about the weirdness around them seemed too unexpected for me, but I think that's because I haven't read this story since the last time you updated, so my memory was a little rusty. Wow, bad sentence. Anyways, good job. I look forward to more.
7/20/2005 c9
2Casey Drake
this is getting interesting... what happens next? they find out they're fictional, this is all a story, and then a strange person named Celyn turns up, rather frightened and confused, and walks right up to them and tells them she better stick with the "motley crew", since she wrote them?
Ok. I'll stop now.
:) CD

this is getting interesting... what happens next? they find out they're fictional, this is all a story, and then a strange person named Celyn turns up, rather frightened and confused, and walks right up to them and tells them she better stick with the "motley crew", since she wrote them?
Ok. I'll stop now.
:) CD
7/2/2005 c1
2temblance
hey! I didn't read much, but I love the concept so far, taking the stereotypes of fantasy and giving an explination for it. It's very well done.

hey! I didn't read much, but I love the concept so far, taking the stereotypes of fantasy and giving an explination for it. It's very well done.
6/14/2005 c1 SilentRiver
THis is so funny! I love it!
THis is so funny! I love it!
6/12/2005 c8
1muffers-person
Well, hazaa. I'm quite enjoying this story. I honestly can't seem to find any criticism to give. You certainly don't need any in the grammatical aspect, and your flow and style and plot are well put together. Perhaps if I go back I might find something, but I doubt it. I'll just sit here contently and keep reading all the chapters you will undoubtedly write. w00t.

Well, hazaa. I'm quite enjoying this story. I honestly can't seem to find any criticism to give. You certainly don't need any in the grammatical aspect, and your flow and style and plot are well put together. Perhaps if I go back I might find something, but I doubt it. I'll just sit here contently and keep reading all the chapters you will undoubtedly write. w00t.
6/11/2005 c2
2Casey Drake
I like one word reviews. When the 'rents are staring over one's shoulder, making sure their daughter is not obsessed with this strange website Fictionpress, one tends to try to do as much reading in a short time span. anyway, I like the story, i like how in Chapter eight you begin to show a connection... believe me, the nearly pointless laughs are great, but I like how you're beginning the real story.
I hope this review is long enough to make up for the many "huhs" and "AAHHs" I've given you up to now.
:D CD

I like one word reviews. When the 'rents are staring over one's shoulder, making sure their daughter is not obsessed with this strange website Fictionpress, one tends to try to do as much reading in a short time span. anyway, I like the story, i like how in Chapter eight you begin to show a connection... believe me, the nearly pointless laughs are great, but I like how you're beginning the real story.
I hope this review is long enough to make up for the many "huhs" and "AAHHs" I've given you up to now.
:D CD
6/11/2005 c8
2wickedstarr42
oh, the plot thickens... again. awesome stuff still, babe. and wtf is ur brummy thing? i even asked my friend (who lives in edgbaston) and he had no idea. he's about as brummy as they come. and 'u rock my socks' is an american thing, so ya. yay! i get especially special huggles! i was so excited about that! lol, love it! keep up the good work, hunny! kiss kiss!

oh, the plot thickens... again. awesome stuff still, babe. and wtf is ur brummy thing? i even asked my friend (who lives in edgbaston) and he had no idea. he's about as brummy as they come. and 'u rock my socks' is an american thing, so ya. yay! i get especially special huggles! i was so excited about that! lol, love it! keep up the good work, hunny! kiss kiss!
6/11/2005 c1
1muffers-person
Your title caught me first. Then I decided to see the first chapter, and I thought it was fairly brilliant. So far, nothing grammatically incorrect has jumped out at me, so I will continue to read on. Thanks for the beginnings of a great story!

Your title caught me first. Then I decided to see the first chapter, and I thought it was fairly brilliant. So far, nothing grammatically incorrect has jumped out at me, so I will continue to read on. Thanks for the beginnings of a great story!
6/11/2005 c8
2Casey Drake
maybe he teaches them science and they show him that real magic exists after all. Though i like the realism; not-so-long ago, people thought magnets were magic.
:) CD

maybe he teaches them science and they show him that real magic exists after all. Though i like the realism; not-so-long ago, people thought magnets were magic.
:) CD