for Blue Looks So Good On You11/26/2006 c1 
8Pryor
That was amazing. Truly amazing. The writing is blunt and beautiful. It's been a while since I've read something so good. Inspiring, brilliant, wonderful. You have quite a gift.
8PryorThat was amazing. Truly amazing. The writing is blunt and beautiful. It's been a while since I've read something so good. Inspiring, brilliant, wonderful. You have quite a gift.
11/17/2006 c1 pieces
"You spoke in sighs and vaguely lilting sleeping tones, sometimes smoke roughened."
"You laughed like dripping oil, light and broken and coloured in dirty swirls."
"I'd say it was your life, but I'm not fond of the blood-heavy taste of irony in my mouth."
... My favorite lines, particularly the last one - it's such an amazing way to forshadow, the reader doesn't even realize what's been done until he gets to the end.
This piece is incredible. The dialogue is a bit shaky (and the bit where your narrator "answers" the junkie; forgive me, I'm not sure whether that was supposed to be spoken aloud), but your descriptions made up for it: very blunt, but very eloquent. Excellent indeed.
"You spoke in sighs and vaguely lilting sleeping tones, sometimes smoke roughened."
"You laughed like dripping oil, light and broken and coloured in dirty swirls."
"I'd say it was your life, but I'm not fond of the blood-heavy taste of irony in my mouth."
... My favorite lines, particularly the last one - it's such an amazing way to forshadow, the reader doesn't even realize what's been done until he gets to the end.
This piece is incredible. The dialogue is a bit shaky (and the bit where your narrator "answers" the junkie; forgive me, I'm not sure whether that was supposed to be spoken aloud), but your descriptions made up for it: very blunt, but very eloquent. Excellent indeed.
5/4/2006 c1 2Broken Bright Eyes
Isnt "Blue Looks So Good On You" a line from a Fall Out Boy song...I believe its Nobody Puts the Baby in the Corner...i could be wrong I always get song titles wrong.
2Broken Bright EyesIsnt "Blue Looks So Good On You" a line from a Fall Out Boy song...I believe its Nobody Puts the Baby in the Corner...i could be wrong I always get song titles wrong.
2/15/2006 c1 Julia D. Castwyth
Scary-Creepy-Cool. It seriously sounds like this one guy i used to know... It works, it flows, it's just - beyond words. Sometimes i wish i could get it down like you can. it just says so much, while saying so little... the perfect story type. Best of luck with this, anD all else.
Godspeed,~Julia
P.S. In light of the recent comment, could you please review my one-shot, We live in the Pictures? Thanks in advance.
Scary-Creepy-Cool. It seriously sounds like this one guy i used to know... It works, it flows, it's just - beyond words. Sometimes i wish i could get it down like you can. it just says so much, while saying so little... the perfect story type. Best of luck with this, anD all else.
Godspeed,~Julia
P.S. In light of the recent comment, could you please review my one-shot, We live in the Pictures? Thanks in advance.
2/1/2006 c1 29Bita-chan
Wow, that was incredible, you are one very talented writer. It was so bitter, and absolutely gorgeous. *Favourites*
29Bita-chanWow, that was incredible, you are one very talented writer. It was so bitter, and absolutely gorgeous. *Favourites*
9/30/2005 c1 Jail
YUM! that was a tasty treat. nicely done. i thought just for a second that you could of made a few more chapeters outta this, but thn i thought...nah. its good how it is short, sweet and bitter.
-x-
YUM! that was a tasty treat. nicely done. i thought just for a second that you could of made a few more chapeters outta this, but thn i thought...nah. its good how it is short, sweet and bitter.
-x-
5/28/2005 c1 katrin
this is genius. simply genius.thank you.
this is genius. simply genius.thank you.
5/18/2005 c1 6Lolita SM Morbid
Oh, this story is absolutely beautiful. When I first read it, I nearly swooned. You seriously have talent. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
6Lolita SM MorbidOh, this story is absolutely beautiful. When I first read it, I nearly swooned. You seriously have talent. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
5/6/2005 c1 Hannah
That is fucking amazing!
That is fucking amazing!
5/2/2005 c1 amoore
oh my god. that was quite possibly the harshest love story ever. wow, i loved it, let me know if you write more. you can email me at or you can add me if you have msn
oh my god. that was quite possibly the harshest love story ever. wow, i loved it, let me know if you write more. you can email me at or you can add me if you have msn
4/30/2005 c1 Dune
::HUGS:: it was great!... now ill tell you on the IM
::HUGS:: it was great!... now ill tell you on the IM
4/18/2005 c1 3bambi4real
wow. that was very dark. But good. i kind of don't know what to feel it is really kind of hopeless and inevitable. Tragic must be the word I am looking for i think.
3bambi4realwow. that was very dark. But good. i kind of don't know what to feel it is really kind of hopeless and inevitable. Tragic must be the word I am looking for i think.
4/18/2005 c1 rachel
that was so absolutely beautiful. oh the angst. is this a one part fic?
that was so absolutely beautiful. oh the angst. is this a one part fic?