for Land of Red5/31/2022 c19 
1acentrix
Apparently the site does not allow me to write the word R****T because that's what I wanted to say. Ren is a f***ing R****T. HOA CAN YOU LIKE HIM? I'm so piossed.
1acentrixApparently the site does not allow me to write the word R****T because that's what I wanted to say. Ren is a f***ing R****T. HOA CAN YOU LIKE HIM? I'm so piossed.
5/31/2022 c18 acentrix
I don't know how the author like someone like Ren. He' T. He BEATS women. He's vicious. HOW THE F***K CAN YOU LIKE HIM? YOU DISGUST ME.
I don't know how the author like someone like Ren. He' T. He BEATS women. He's vicious. HOW THE F***K CAN YOU LIKE HIM? YOU DISGUST ME.
12/16/2020 c9 6Polished Gem
It was a fantastic use of words to describe sexual tension. I love the way you describe things. It brings the images so vividly to my mind. I loved in the other chapter how you mentioned the sensation like something was tugging on her navel. I've never heard that described in a book before, although I'm sure we've all had that sensation before when we're nervous, or attracted to someone. Great word choice, great imagery.
6Polished GemIt was a fantastic use of words to describe sexual tension. I love the way you describe things. It brings the images so vividly to my mind. I loved in the other chapter how you mentioned the sensation like something was tugging on her navel. I've never heard that described in a book before, although I'm sure we've all had that sensation before when we're nervous, or attracted to someone. Great word choice, great imagery.
5/31/2018 c12 Ariana
I've been actively reading this in every first period computers class. So addicting. I can't wait to read the next chapter-your writing is amazing.
I've been actively reading this in every first period computers class. So addicting. I can't wait to read the next chapter-your writing is amazing.
7/8/2017 c19 Serena Usagi Shields-Chiba
Great story, really liked the way you wrote the characters. They were all very distinct (for example the princes were very opposite in nature) but still relatable (even Ren)
Kinda stumbled upon this story, but I'm very glad that I did. Even more happy to find out that there is a sequel and elated to see you've updated recently after a long break. Loved the first half of Aliana's story :)
Great story, really liked the way you wrote the characters. They were all very distinct (for example the princes were very opposite in nature) but still relatable (even Ren)
Kinda stumbled upon this story, but I'm very glad that I did. Even more happy to find out that there is a sequel and elated to see you've updated recently after a long break. Loved the first half of Aliana's story :)
12/22/2015 c9 Strange dawn
I liked the chapter. As for sexual tension, I thought you did a better job of it in the garden scene. Its a bit hard to do sexual tension with a virgin point of view though! :)
I liked the chapter. As for sexual tension, I thought you did a better job of it in the garden scene. Its a bit hard to do sexual tension with a virgin point of view though! :)
9/23/2015 c18 sunrise21
Wow, this story...the ending was beautiful! I'm so glad to see justice for all injured by Ren's evilness. Overcome evil with good. I'm also glad the king exiled her and Ti. The two of them have been through so much. A brilliant story indeed!
Wow, this story...the ending was beautiful! I'm so glad to see justice for all injured by Ren's evilness. Overcome evil with good. I'm also glad the king exiled her and Ti. The two of them have been through so much. A brilliant story indeed!
9/23/2015 c17 sunrise21
Wow, I wasn't expecting this plot. You like Ren?...speechless
Wow, I wasn't expecting this plot. You like Ren?...speechless
9/23/2015 c15 sunrise21
I'm kind of disappointed with the sex scene in this chapter. all this tension you built up to this scene and I'm sorry it just fell kind of flat for me.
I expected more exploration of one another. More reaction to what was going on between them. It just seemed, quick, to quick.
In your defense, I'm trying to remind myself that time was short and the guards were outside.
I'm kind of disappointed with the sex scene in this chapter. all this tension you built up to this scene and I'm sorry it just fell kind of flat for me.
I expected more exploration of one another. More reaction to what was going on between them. It just seemed, quick, to quick.
In your defense, I'm trying to remind myself that time was short and the guards were outside.
9/23/2015 c14 sunrise21
I had a feeling Ti did not escape so easily...I hope for a happy ending...though I'd be surprised to get one.
I had a feeling Ti did not escape so easily...I hope for a happy ending...though I'd be surprised to get one.
9/23/2015 c12 sunrise21
Oh goodness, I hope she isn't pregnant! Refering to not eating and things like that...
Poor Man thinking the worsed about Aliana and none of it is true!
Oh goodness, I hope she isn't pregnant! Refering to not eating and things like that...
Poor Man thinking the worsed about Aliana and none of it is true!