for Awake Dear Soul!9/1/2005 c1 
4Cobain88
This is an extremely well written piece, I look forward to reading more from you.
4Cobain88This is an extremely well written piece, I look forward to reading more from you.
5/19/2005 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Excellent, I love your use of language. Wonderfully written.
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
Thanks for the review of "Ceremony" by the way. I have some new pieces up for your delectation. ^_^
292Fabian CortezExcellent, I love your use of language. Wonderfully written.
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
Thanks for the review of "Ceremony" by the way. I have some new pieces up for your delectation. ^_^
5/13/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
haha i love this, mainly because in my literature class it was always distractingly funny to laugh when you had to read out things like "what ho!" (King Lear) and stuff, yeah i like this, am working on a poem related to Romeo and Juliet but will probly go back to it in the summer.
the last word - for reasons which should be obvious - made me smile in my tired state so hats off to you
x weasel within x
haha i love this, mainly because in my literature class it was always distractingly funny to laugh when you had to read out things like "what ho!" (King Lear) and stuff, yeah i like this, am working on a poem related to Romeo and Juliet but will probly go back to it in the summer.
the last word - for reasons which should be obvious - made me smile in my tired state so hats off to you
x weasel within x
5/13/2005 c1 2DaybreakStorms08
Great job! It really does sound like Middle English, and so easily rhymed, too - very well done. Love the vocabulary! Keep it up!
2DaybreakStorms08Great job! It really does sound like Middle English, and so easily rhymed, too - very well done. Love the vocabulary! Keep it up!
5/4/2005 c1 heart so bitter sweet
hey there's it is I, the great, non slut or bitch jessi... finally i read at least one of them and i loved it
hey there's it is I, the great, non slut or bitch jessi... finally i read at least one of them and i loved it
4/21/2005 c1 82Death-By-Papercut
cool...its very well written in a difficuly dialect...great job squiggy
82Death-By-Papercutcool...its very well written in a difficuly dialect...great job squiggy
4/19/2005 c1 87youzi
Very brave to write in old english =D I enjoyed this one..particularly 'Unmask the saline chasms'... cool
87youziVery brave to write in old english =D I enjoyed this one..particularly 'Unmask the saline chasms'... cool
4/18/2005 c1 nick-wordsmith
Beautiful, m'dear. I wouldn't ask you to change it in any way.
Stones decay, words lastNick
Beautiful, m'dear. I wouldn't ask you to change it in any way.
Stones decay, words lastNick