for Shallow Grave4/20/2005 c1 
19Lizzybelle Kay
very different. but i like it. it made me really think. i didn't know whether to laugh or say "that's so sad." but anyway, don't get me wrong i really liked it. i also love your pen name! awesome!
19Lizzybelle Kayvery different. but i like it. it made me really think. i didn't know whether to laugh or say "that's so sad." but anyway, don't get me wrong i really liked it. i also love your pen name! awesome!
4/20/2005 c1 23suckerplucker
this is a really interesting concept, but i want to know more about what happened! Who threw the headstone? Why?I think that you're being held back by using a rhyme scheme. Drop it and see where it takes you.
zac
23suckerpluckerthis is a really interesting concept, but i want to know more about what happened! Who threw the headstone? Why?I think that you're being held back by using a rhyme scheme. Drop it and see where it takes you.
zac