Reviews: And Her Wishes Never Came True

6/22/2005 c1

24LovesTeardrop
Wow nice work. Especially good for a spur of the minute poem. I like the concept behind this. It flows nicely too. Well done

4/20/2005 c1

2jayderose
I really like the 2 lines- But in her wake...and in black ink; I thought it was really entrancing. I liked this poem, but one thing kept nagging at me (but thats just me): singed. Otherwise it was powerful.