for Farewell10/21/2006 c1 
15greenGalilee
Excellent haiku. I love the infinite, everwordly meaning and the simple question you ask it.
15greenGalileeExcellent haiku. I love the infinite, everwordly meaning and the simple question you ask it.
9/19/2006 c1 42Britani- Friend of the Bears
I love your haikus (i think thats how you spell it...) very nice.
42Britani- Friend of the BearsI love your haikus (i think thats how you spell it...) very nice.
8/19/2006 c1 Mad Hatter Kiss
Amazing touch you've done ^^
Amazing touch you've done ^^
8/18/2006 c1 16Take The Stairs
O...very nice. I think the haiku form is perfect for this poem. If it was longer it would probably get annoying. Short but sweet.
Thanks for the reviews ^^
16Take The StairsO...very nice. I think the haiku form is perfect for this poem. If it was longer it would probably get annoying. Short but sweet.
Thanks for the reviews ^^
8/17/2006 c1 raventonguethemalice
M... somewhat depressive, I enjoy this though. Your writting is wonderful, and when I have time I will review them all (so it seems you have enough on this one... OMG)
~raventonguethemalice
M... somewhat depressive, I enjoy this though. Your writting is wonderful, and when I have time I will review them all (so it seems you have enough on this one... OMG)
~raventonguethemalice
8/7/2006 c1 118Thenardier
I've just read all your work, and they're all splendid, but this one is my favourite as it feels so honest, and rejuvenating somehow. Perhaps, it gives me hope.
118ThenardierI've just read all your work, and they're all splendid, but this one is my favourite as it feels so honest, and rejuvenating somehow. Perhaps, it gives me hope.
8/3/2006 c1 270dustytiger
you have a way with hiaku, it doesn't make me want to go postal, another great peice, keep up the good work
270dustytigeryou have a way with hiaku, it doesn't make me want to go postal, another great peice, keep up the good work
8/3/2006 c1 Safira
Although I'm not to fond of the question mark in the the centre of the haiku, as it momentarily detracts me from the piece as a whole, I do like this haiku. Short, simple, and above all thought-provoking!
Autumn.
Although I'm not to fond of the question mark in the the centre of the haiku, as it momentarily detracts me from the piece as a whole, I do like this haiku. Short, simple, and above all thought-provoking!
Autumn.
7/21/2006 c1 18How-Big-Is-Your-Violin
Wow... I've wondered that at one point for no reason...great haiku. Please continue!
18How-Big-Is-Your-ViolinWow... I've wondered that at one point for no reason...great haiku. Please continue!