
5/17/2005 c1
8the heart's pawn-shop
wow thats deep. nice descriptions. i thought that love dilute with wine was amazing.keep writing!-the heart's pawn-shop

wow thats deep. nice descriptions. i thought that love dilute with wine was amazing.keep writing!-the heart's pawn-shop
4/20/2005 c1
128Cordelia Riordan
I liked reading this poem. You're right that it's not obvious how she dies, but I think you should leave that up to interpretation. Personally, I think the husband killed her. But that's just my interpretation. Poems are good when they're up to interpretation. This was good. Keep writing.

I liked reading this poem. You're right that it's not obvious how she dies, but I think you should leave that up to interpretation. Personally, I think the husband killed her. But that's just my interpretation. Poems are good when they're up to interpretation. This was good. Keep writing.