for Foxified9/8/2012 c2 Bear104
It's been a while since your last update but this story sounds interesting. Hopefully there will be more.:-)
It's been a while since your last update but this story sounds interesting. Hopefully there will be more.:-)
8/15/2012 c2 Choukou
I think I've read this before... but it's been such a long time. Hopefully you update? :) Pretty please?
I think I've read this before... but it's been such a long time. Hopefully you update? :) Pretty please?
6/20/2012 c2 
1spottedfire98
Umm...are you going to update this? Cuz this is a HUGE cliffhanger for all of us readers to end on...ya...so
I hope you decide to update :)
1spottedfire98Umm...are you going to update this? Cuz this is a HUGE cliffhanger for all of us readers to end on...ya...so
I hope you decide to update :)
2/4/2012 c2 Preposterous
I see you haven't updated in a while, but this story is so interesting. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
I see you haven't updated in a while, but this story is so interesting. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
12/13/2011 c1 4effortless-inelegance
I read what you originally had written of this story before you removed it. I hope you plan to continue updating your revisions! I LOVE this story!
4effortless-ineleganceI read what you originally had written of this story before you removed it. I hope you plan to continue updating your revisions! I LOVE this story!
12/12/2011 c2 Sleepy.Beyond.Reason
Okay...so I like the story and would love to know what the heck is going on! The main character, Rae, I think you've yet describe her appearance. She also seems kind of like an empty shell at this point. The idea is very good and really interesting, but I'd like to see more of it.
Okay...so I like the story and would love to know what the heck is going on! The main character, Rae, I think you've yet describe her appearance. She also seems kind of like an empty shell at this point. The idea is very good and really interesting, but I'd like to see more of it.
11/1/2011 c2 grace under pressure
OH MY GOSH! you HAVE to update this story! I read it forever ago before you started re-editing it and LOVED it! However, I figured it was on permanent hiatus, as you hadn't updated in years. Now that you're updating it, I'm so excited! But now I'm worried since you haven't updated in about seven months... PLEASE don't give up!
- grace e. lane
OH MY GOSH! you HAVE to update this story! I read it forever ago before you started re-editing it and LOVED it! However, I figured it was on permanent hiatus, as you hadn't updated in years. Now that you're updating it, I'm so excited! But now I'm worried since you haven't updated in about seven months... PLEASE don't give up!
- grace e. lane
7/11/2011 c2 XxAmberRomancexX
Its cool to see this updated! This was one of the first stories I ever read on FictionPress...I thought it had been abandoned for sure. I'm looking forward to future updates!
Its cool to see this updated! This was one of the first stories I ever read on FictionPress...I thought it had been abandoned for sure. I'm looking forward to future updates!
4/16/2011 c2 Ash-Rulz
plz plz continue it's so amazing thanks you!
love ya ( don't take it the wrong way )
plz plz continue it's so amazing thanks you!
love ya ( don't take it the wrong way )
4/2/2011 c2 7The Latest Plague
oh. my. goodness. I thought i had to give up this story.I'm so happy you're giving this story another shot! :)
7The Latest Plagueoh. my. goodness. I thought i had to give up this story.I'm so happy you're giving this story another shot! :)