for Insomnia7/12/2005 c1 
6Gilee7
This doesn't really seem to have a point, and it doesn't seem finished. But I guess it is, cuz it was written almost 3 months ago now and there has yet to be any more chapters. I didn't care so much for the first two paragraph, especially the first one. I don't really see the effectiveness of saying her grade or wondering if she'd be like the classmate she shared the same name with. It does nothing for the story, and it sticks out like a big red pimple. The last 3 paragraphs are excellent though. Those were the most powerful. I especially love all the questions. I wish this was longer though. There's some beautiful writing mixed in with just some average writing, but still pretty good job overall.
6Gilee7This doesn't really seem to have a point, and it doesn't seem finished. But I guess it is, cuz it was written almost 3 months ago now and there has yet to be any more chapters. I didn't care so much for the first two paragraph, especially the first one. I don't really see the effectiveness of saying her grade or wondering if she'd be like the classmate she shared the same name with. It does nothing for the story, and it sticks out like a big red pimple. The last 3 paragraphs are excellent though. Those were the most powerful. I especially love all the questions. I wish this was longer though. There's some beautiful writing mixed in with just some average writing, but still pretty good job overall.