
9/13/2005 c1
109ADSpencer
I love this poem. It's great that so many of your poems are based on technology, modern stuff made primative. Great work.

I love this poem. It's great that so many of your poems are based on technology, modern stuff made primative. Great work.
8/28/2005 c1
3Debbie-chan
Hi! Well this was a great poem. It made me laugh and my dad got all annoyed cuz I woke him up from his nap. It's also sad in a freakish sorta way. And it's all true. Well sorry I'm really bad at reviewing poems.
~Ja ne!~ Debbie-chan
PS Uh, sorry about this, but I just have to ask could you please review burnout? Please and thank you ^^

Hi! Well this was a great poem. It made me laugh and my dad got all annoyed cuz I woke him up from his nap. It's also sad in a freakish sorta way. And it's all true. Well sorry I'm really bad at reviewing poems.
~Ja ne!~ Debbie-chan
PS Uh, sorry about this, but I just have to ask could you please review burnout? Please and thank you ^^
7/13/2005 c1
1A. Tieman
That was cool. I really liked it. No criticism to be made.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story 9/11. Just to let you know, all those people were made up, and none of those are actual stories. The only one is Jason which is what happened to me and how I acted when I found out at school. Thanks again for reading it.

That was cool. I really liked it. No criticism to be made.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story 9/11. Just to let you know, all those people were made up, and none of those are actual stories. The only one is Jason which is what happened to me and how I acted when I found out at school. Thanks again for reading it.
6/13/2005 c1
1SomeCowgirl
Very Very Creeppy sadistic type poem, that is very true. Never thought of it this way.

Very Very Creeppy sadistic type poem, that is very true. Never thought of it this way.
5/22/2005 c1
6Toni Berthelette
haha really good poem-I love the Sims! It's really fun to be in complete control of their lives =)This is really good! I actually made a family that's me (only grown up) and I'm married with four kids-it's awesome. I make it so my job is the best-I'm general in the military, haha I'm sure you all care. oh, and thanks so much for your review! that was really nice =) well, off to read some more of your stuff-later
~*Toni*~

haha really good poem-I love the Sims! It's really fun to be in complete control of their lives =)This is really good! I actually made a family that's me (only grown up) and I'm married with four kids-it's awesome. I make it so my job is the best-I'm general in the military, haha I'm sure you all care. oh, and thanks so much for your review! that was really nice =) well, off to read some more of your stuff-later
~*Toni*~
5/9/2005 c1
74LaceAnSpiderwebs
not the best prose, but i really like this idea. perhaps develope it with a religious twist, or... well actually, it was pretty cool already.

not the best prose, but i really like this idea. perhaps develope it with a religious twist, or... well actually, it was pretty cool already.
4/22/2005 c1 PuzzledThinker
Wow now i have been on the sims. they dont listen to me. So BLAH lol. That was a good poem that came out of the sims game ^
Wow now i have been on the sims. they dont listen to me. So BLAH lol. That was a good poem that came out of the sims game ^
4/22/2005 c1
132mizu no kokoro
Interesting^^ i never played the game before lol~ very nicely written though!
keep writing!

Interesting^^ i never played the game before lol~ very nicely written though!
keep writing!
4/22/2005 c1 kayttea
wow that is a really good poem! very original and i especially like the last line. 'and the mouse lies in my hand'. GREAT poem i mean it. till next time!
-kay
wow that is a really good poem! very original and i especially like the last line. 'and the mouse lies in my hand'. GREAT poem i mean it. till next time!
-kay