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8/18/2005 c1 39Alisha Marie
Well this really amazing...Great job!
5/5/2005 c1 102Joewhatever
-claps- I think I've fallen in love with this poem.
5/3/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Powerful.
5/1/2005 c1 addie pray
This was...god, trying to find an analogy and only coming up with: endless cigarettes after sprite-vodka kisses...utterly satisfying, and very well done.
4/27/2005 c1 Made in U.S.A
wow this is amazing really. great job and keep writing:D also you just made my favorites :D
4/23/2005 c1 84Escapist
YOU want to grow up to be like ME? I could (and probably will) read this poem an absurd amount of times. It's so delicate and perfect. And Betty? The Bettys are endless amounts of writing material in themselves.

if not for my toothpick cabini might be a little like scarlett o’hara

I love lines like that.
4/23/2005 c1 9Burning Schoolhouse
I totally Heart this! I love the part about Betty and the toothpick cabin and the tabascco scause and mustard stains! your an effin' genius... so much realism, you so good at noticing everything around you, it's breathe-taking...
4/22/2005 c1 69this is britt
I loved this title for starters. and "Please have mercy on me" and that line about Sputnik- lately, it seems, to me, you have been fixtated on the 1950s. which is very cool. I love it.

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