for Shattered Reflections2/23/2006 c1 
4bluemoonchelsea
Wow. This was very well done. The imagery was a little overdone, but it is still very elegant. It is so well done in the fact that you are reffering to many different issues at once, not only focussing on one paticular idea. People can apply so many things to this piece, so many things in their own lives.
Your contrasts are absolutely lovely. You talk about the icy shards in one verse, if I may call it that, and in the next, you talk about the burning of the splintered reflection. Well done.
Overall, a nice piece. Keep writing.
Blue Moon
4bluemoonchelseaWow. This was very well done. The imagery was a little overdone, but it is still very elegant. It is so well done in the fact that you are reffering to many different issues at once, not only focussing on one paticular idea. People can apply so many things to this piece, so many things in their own lives.
Your contrasts are absolutely lovely. You talk about the icy shards in one verse, if I may call it that, and in the next, you talk about the burning of the splintered reflection. Well done.
Overall, a nice piece. Keep writing.
Blue Moon
9/20/2005 c1 40T41N7
You should understand that there are so many people who have only seen you by your reflection in that mirror. You aren't the only one who can visualize yourself as perfect, beleive me on that one. I know because I have never seen you, but only read your poetry. By reading such beutiful works of literature, I know that you as well are beutiful. That is just who you are. That mirror is what lets you see your true self, you should never break it.
40T41N7You should understand that there are so many people who have only seen you by your reflection in that mirror. You aren't the only one who can visualize yourself as perfect, beleive me on that one. I know because I have never seen you, but only read your poetry. By reading such beutiful works of literature, I know that you as well are beutiful. That is just who you are. That mirror is what lets you see your true self, you should never break it.
9/5/2005 c1 cardiphonia
Wow this poem is powerful. I love how the mirror is first calm, safe and loving and then turns elemental (with the ice and the fire). The searching and the yearning, the clinging it's all there! I don't know if you meant it this way but I interpret the ending like this; you see yourself as you for the first time and the mirror is broken because it can't really show you how you are, you become yourself again and you don't care about what the mirror tells you anymore...I may be way off..but it makes sense in my head. Thanks for reviewing!
Wow this poem is powerful. I love how the mirror is first calm, safe and loving and then turns elemental (with the ice and the fire). The searching and the yearning, the clinging it's all there! I don't know if you meant it this way but I interpret the ending like this; you see yourself as you for the first time and the mirror is broken because it can't really show you how you are, you become yourself again and you don't care about what the mirror tells you anymore...I may be way off..but it makes sense in my head. Thanks for reviewing!
8/18/2005 c1 38CarpeDiem28
Whoa...now THAT is a powerful poem. I like it. I have nothing to say about it except that. I am not well at writing reviews, and so, that it all I have to say. It is powerful, and I could tell that a lot of effort was put inot this poem.
Keep up the work!
38CarpeDiem28Whoa...now THAT is a powerful poem. I like it. I have nothing to say about it except that. I am not well at writing reviews, and so, that it all I have to say. It is powerful, and I could tell that a lot of effort was put inot this poem.
Keep up the work!
8/10/2005 c1 18Seraphim-thorn
I absolutly love this..
p.s. thanx for the review...don't worry the poem was not about death it was about a boy I consider an angel..i'm praying that he sees that i'm in love with him and that i'm "Just around the bend"
18Seraphim-thornI absolutly love this..
p.s. thanx for the review...don't worry the poem was not about death it was about a boy I consider an angel..i'm praying that he sees that i'm in love with him and that i'm "Just around the bend"
8/8/2005 c1 11Malicena Tzorcelan
Really good, it touched me because thats how I feel sometimes. Sad poem that people can see themselves in.I liked the endingMalicena Tzorcelan
11Malicena TzorcelanReally good, it touched me because thats how I feel sometimes. Sad poem that people can see themselves in.I liked the endingMalicena Tzorcelan
8/7/2005 c1 73Rozlin
so beautiful... what i see it as is people see you as perfect untill you shatter their preconceptions... (maybe not perfect but my minds numb and i can't think of anything else...
73Rozlinso beautiful... what i see it as is people see you as perfect untill you shatter their preconceptions... (maybe not perfect but my minds numb and i can't think of anything else...
8/6/2005 c1 19cycle.of.ashes
Okay do you know how many reviews you've gotten for this that started with "Wow"? 14! I envy your wow-ing abilities... Yes I'm a freak for going back and counting but I thot u mite like to know. Anyhoo- Yeah, I agree with everyone else. Wow.
19cycle.of.ashesOkay do you know how many reviews you've gotten for this that started with "Wow"? 14! I envy your wow-ing abilities... Yes I'm a freak for going back and counting but I thot u mite like to know. Anyhoo- Yeah, I agree with everyone else. Wow.
8/1/2005 c1 30Shes Never Known Happy
i really liked this one i just dont know how to explain it well -wishes luck- i hope you continue writing
30Shes Never Known Happyi really liked this one i just dont know how to explain it well -wishes luck- i hope you continue writing
8/1/2005 c1 17dancingintheshadows
I can really relate to this as I myself have often felt such things... The poem was lovely.
~dancingintheshadows
17dancingintheshadowsI can really relate to this as I myself have often felt such things... The poem was lovely.
~dancingintheshadows
8/1/2005 c1 51bangbangstartagain
that was really good. i loved it. it was brilliantly written. well done.
laters...
AT
51bangbangstartagainthat was really good. i loved it. it was brilliantly written. well done.
laters...
AT
7/31/2005 c1 105eraced
wo. thats deep and i don't what else to say."mirror,subservet twin stairing back at me."
105eracedwo. thats deep and i don't what else to say."mirror,subservet twin stairing back at me."
7/26/2005 c1 30jez two
This is a powerful and very enjoyeable piece. I think anyone who has been severly depressed can probably relate to this in one way or other.It says a lot in an abstract fashion. I love the last few lines, the contradiction from the logic of the rest of the poem is wonderful.Well done!
30jez twoThis is a powerful and very enjoyeable piece. I think anyone who has been severly depressed can probably relate to this in one way or other.It says a lot in an abstract fashion. I love the last few lines, the contradiction from the logic of the rest of the poem is wonderful.Well done!
7/22/2005 c1 17incandescent.smiles
woah... you have a LOT of fans... anywho. First of all, thank you thank you THANK YOU (!) for the reviews! *ahem* anyway...
This was simply lovely. Well, not really simple. But lovely all the same. The way you refer to your reflection as 'it' throughout the *fantasy* part of the poem emphasizes how much of a lie everything is.
And the ending. It made me stop and re-read at least three times over. A beautiful way to end this, it makes the poem complete. (this may be WAY out in left field but...) I think that it gives a message that being broken transcends all lies... if that made any sense (?). And the way you separated the lines made it all the more powerful.
I understand now why you have so many readers and reviewers, this is amazingly done. Prefect.
~Leila*
17incandescent.smileswoah... you have a LOT of fans... anywho. First of all, thank you thank you THANK YOU (!) for the reviews! *ahem* anyway...
This was simply lovely. Well, not really simple. But lovely all the same. The way you refer to your reflection as 'it' throughout the *fantasy* part of the poem emphasizes how much of a lie everything is.
And the ending. It made me stop and re-read at least three times over. A beautiful way to end this, it makes the poem complete. (this may be WAY out in left field but...) I think that it gives a message that being broken transcends all lies... if that made any sense (?). And the way you separated the lines made it all the more powerful.
I understand now why you have so many readers and reviewers, this is amazingly done. Prefect.
~Leila*
7/21/2005 c1 27AnonymousAffirmation
Tag! You reviewed me so now I'm reviewing you =D
I like you're writing, especially this one. Sorta reminds me of that Evanescence song "breathe no more"...I dont know if you'd take that as a good thing though but I like the song so...yeah.
I interpreted this as you were just finding your true self or discovering new parts of you emotionally. But that's just the way I see it.
*Rae*
27AnonymousAffirmationTag! You reviewed me so now I'm reviewing you =D
I like you're writing, especially this one. Sorta reminds me of that Evanescence song "breathe no more"...I dont know if you'd take that as a good thing though but I like the song so...yeah.
I interpreted this as you were just finding your true self or discovering new parts of you emotionally. But that's just the way I see it.
*Rae*