
4/25/2005 c1
24Sarah-Brighteyes
I love this little bit of teenage angst. You seem to have the mood swings down to a perfection haha. Good piece... nice flow and your stanzas have a rhythmic pattern. Bravo to you.

I love this little bit of teenage angst. You seem to have the mood swings down to a perfection haha. Good piece... nice flow and your stanzas have a rhythmic pattern. Bravo to you.