
10/11/2006 c1
21Chocolate Herrings
Ok, I love this one. I got an amazing mental picture of this gorgeous Catholic church and a perfect, serene Mother Mary...and a sense of loss.

Ok, I love this one. I got an amazing mental picture of this gorgeous Catholic church and a perfect, serene Mother Mary...and a sense of loss.
10/11/2006 c1
4autumnmurder
Oh Wow, this piece almost seems surreal! I really enjoyed it. I especially liked: "Dawn circulating her head brings the Virgin Mary to life./She sweeps to my side, taking my hand in hers./Silk overcomes my scared and feeble flesh./My fingers are entwined in Egyptian cotton."

Oh Wow, this piece almost seems surreal! I really enjoyed it. I especially liked: "Dawn circulating her head brings the Virgin Mary to life./She sweeps to my side, taking my hand in hers./Silk overcomes my scared and feeble flesh./My fingers are entwined in Egyptian cotton."
4/23/2005 c1
13Draven DarkCrow
wow...the title definaitly (excuse the bad spelling) drew me into this poem...I really like it, the words and images just flow together...well done
xo

wow...the title definaitly (excuse the bad spelling) drew me into this poem...I really like it, the words and images just flow together...well done
xo