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10/11/2006 c1 21Chocolate Herrings
Ok, I love this one. I got an amazing mental picture of this gorgeous Catholic church and a perfect, serene Mother Mary...and a sense of loss.
10/11/2006 c1 4autumnmurder
Oh Wow, this piece almost seems surreal! I really enjoyed it. I especially liked: "Dawn circulating her head brings the Virgin Mary to life./She sweeps to my side, taking my hand in hers./Silk overcomes my scared and feeble flesh./My fingers are entwined in Egyptian cotton."
5/2/2006 c1 4SilverAndFlames
interesting... almost dreamlike, beautiful. Well done.
4/23/2005 c1 13Draven DarkCrow
wow...the title definaitly (excuse the bad spelling) drew me into this poem...I really like it, the words and images just flow together...well done

xo

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