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4/15/2008 c1 FTL
This makes me... humbled. Erm. I tend to write anger- boohoo, I'm a frustrated kid poetry (and I like it that way), but this just put me at peace for a moment. :)

Buzz, buzz. I dig it.
2/11/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
Interesting... I like the comparison in the last line. Good work.

Thanks for reviewing.

~:Isabella-May:~
5/14/2005 c1 Edraith
Interesting concept, the comparison does make a lot of sense and is beautifully expressed, good job.
4/29/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Captured IT right there, perfect.
4/24/2005 c1 16lazy person
I am very impressed. This tanka portrays very clearly the not so clear perspective one receives, when looking through a kaleidoscope. I read it three times, and when I finished the third time, the world seemed shifted. I very much enjoyed this one.lazy

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