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9/29/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konban wa

I absolutely had to stop for Van Gogh - I'm weird like that. :) So I read it and then felt compelled to review, and who am I to interfere with my crazy whirlwind thoughts? (That and I make it a point to review as much as I possibly can) So here I am with perpetual praises and no way of verbalizing myself, which is often a difficulty for me. I especially loved the line, "He will need crimson paint" and what that hints to (despair I'm assuming, but I could be wrong).

Kudos. Brilliant poem.

Zaijen

-Shan-
4/29/2007 c1 disabled account
Three cheers for citations from Sylvia Plath! "Dying is an art. I do it exceptionally well." (You may or may not particularly like Plath; as for me, I adore her). At any rate, I like that the quote was interspersed with elements related to van Gogh. Adieu, Kat
2/8/2007 c1 588Setsuna529
Very tongue-in-cheek, the way I interpret it. The Van Gogh allusion works nicely.
5/3/2005 c1 83BlueRose218
THe pacing is a bit off in the 2nd and 3rd lines, but you still captured Van Gogh's torment very well. In fact, the pacing sort of helps..
4/29/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
You captured him nicely.
4/24/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
Wow! The metaphor you used here is original and amazes me. Awesome job!

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