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6/5/2005 c1 337Luthiena o Lorien
Excellent poem! The flow of it is very smooth, and I only noticed one mistake:"Greater that any gold"I am not sure if you meant it to be like that, but I am pretty sure you meant "Greater than any gold"
5/10/2005 c1 33aeolyn
Wow, this is a really beautifully written poem. I love the idea of the old musty book of fairytales and adventure. I really liked the lines "Read through the musty pages/Full of secrets untold/Greater that any gold" Great Job!

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