for The Book6/5/2005 c1 
337Luthiena o Lorien
Excellent poem! The flow of it is very smooth, and I only noticed one mistake:"Greater that any gold"I am not sure if you meant it to be like that, but I am pretty sure you meant "Greater than any gold"
337Luthiena o LorienExcellent poem! The flow of it is very smooth, and I only noticed one mistake:"Greater that any gold"I am not sure if you meant it to be like that, but I am pretty sure you meant "Greater than any gold"