for Feel4/24/2005 c1 
24Sarah-Brighteyes
Great use of repitition in this piece. it worked wonders. I think alot of us can relate to this. We force ourselves to be negative and to not look at what we have around us that can bring us joy...and in the end we ruin it for ourselves (though most of us blame others or circumstances instead). Very good piece though...a thinking piece to be sure. My favorite kind. Bravo to you.
24Sarah-BrighteyesGreat use of repitition in this piece. it worked wonders. I think alot of us can relate to this. We force ourselves to be negative and to not look at what we have around us that can bring us joy...and in the end we ruin it for ourselves (though most of us blame others or circumstances instead). Very good piece though...a thinking piece to be sure. My favorite kind. Bravo to you.