for tictactoe11/18/2005 c1 
28Narcotic-x-Poppies
this was a good idea for a poem and i wish i could have thought of it! very well done! keep writing
~Dri!
28Narcotic-x-Poppiesthis was a good idea for a poem and i wish i could have thought of it! very well done! keep writing
~Dri!
7/27/2005 c1 26Chi Ame
This poem is indeed raw. I had to read it a couple times to get my thoughts going (it's also quite early in the morning, though, and that could be part of it). Excellent, I'm especially liking the second stanza because of the, "everything that she'd believed in was a game". Very nice touch.
26Chi AmeThis poem is indeed raw. I had to read it a couple times to get my thoughts going (it's also quite early in the morning, though, and that could be part of it). Excellent, I'm especially liking the second stanza because of the, "everything that she'd believed in was a game". Very nice touch.
6/21/2005 c1 37negligible fictional force
i like i like. anti-teenie angst message beautifully wrapped up in poetry paper. only you could do that. beautifully done. -wallflower.
37negligible fictional forcei like i like. anti-teenie angst message beautifully wrapped up in poetry paper. only you could do that. beautifully done. -wallflower.
6/11/2005 c1 elenlinde
mich here. (i found my fp acct hehe.)
raw and angtsy is right. this is so raw that my brain's in a whirl.
i like.
mich here. (i found my fp acct hehe.)
raw and angtsy is right. this is so raw that my brain's in a whirl.
i like.
5/31/2005 c1 60dollface and her cancer
"But now she's not too sure"... the imagery runs through your veins in conflicting patterns of Xs and Os. You have completely captured the insecurity of human nature, and the inconsistencies of living. All in twenty lines or less. Wonderful.
60dollface and her cancer"But now she's not too sure"... the imagery runs through your veins in conflicting patterns of Xs and Os. You have completely captured the insecurity of human nature, and the inconsistencies of living. All in twenty lines or less. Wonderful.
5/1/2005 c1 64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle
the scattered is organized, set like a scar; that pattern that you can tell was already there. the game lingering in her head BECAUSE it was left unplayed. yes games look like just that, a fun play, until you realize the game is only you.
64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIciclethe scattered is organized, set like a scar; that pattern that you can tell was already there. the game lingering in her head BECAUSE it was left unplayed. yes games look like just that, a fun play, until you realize the game is only you.
4/27/2005 c1 42and flowers
i like the way that is messy reading, as if these are seemingly scattered thoughts, and placed in stanzas. i rather like it. the thought of looking good on paper is especially good. -
42and flowersi like the way that is messy reading, as if these are seemingly scattered thoughts, and placed in stanzas. i rather like it. the thought of looking good on paper is especially good. -
4/24/2005 c1 16if sighing
everything looks better on paper (well almost everything)
a poem so raw that I'm chewing on trying to swallow it whole
your name reminds me of a story statikiss
16if sighingeverything looks better on paper (well almost everything)
a poem so raw that I'm chewing on trying to swallow it whole
your name reminds me of a story statikiss