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for A Man Formerly Known As Father

10/9/2010 c1 16non.graceful
tear.. :'( ... sounds like something i'd write for someone i hated... though i'd never write about something i hate because things that are hated, don't need a say
7/6/2006 c1 2pagemaster09
Wow, I really must say, I can relate to this a lot. I really like it, and you can tell what your feelings are through this.
4/1/2006 c1 1Brandon Lee Bowden
WOW! that's the only word that comes to mind! Really good! Great job!
2/9/2006 c1 WaningMoon
Nice...Really nice. But I think the impact of the words might have been a little stronger if you hadn't used exclamation marks, because then it's not like, silent anger, which is like way stronger. But anyway, I really like ths poem...Keep writing!
1/23/2006 c1 10Cookie20007
wow this poem was absolutly incredible!
12/14/2005 c1 71Nyghtraven
Wow, that was very powerful and really good. I love how you captured the emotion so well, it's amazing.~nyghtraven
6/29/2005 c1 D. H. Laydee
This poem is sad...it made me want to cry...you really captured your feelings well
4/26/2005 c1 1Infinite Abyss
Great poem.
4/25/2005 c1 89write25
THAT WAS AMAZING! The combination or rythm and ryhme, not to mention the amazing words spoken through to poem, just make it perfect. I really enjoyed reading that...it's always nice to read a heartfelt, well written poem. ~Mariah
4/25/2005 c1 5angels-outofthe-ashes
wow this is really good! i really liked how you expressed your anger twards your dad, it was really...real. But yea keep writing and thanks for sharing your poem!
4/25/2005 c1 40Moosher
Wow, That is seriously deep.. I like it though. Im actually quite close to my father, but I think the person that can really relate to this is my best friend.. N e ways, Great writing, keep it up!Much love, Meme
4/25/2005 c1 Hawk Mage
That is nice too. Very very good.
4/24/2005 c1 157darkmistresslae
Wow, this is really powerful. I like it a lot, and I can relate to it so much. Really nice poem, the ending is especially moving
4/24/2005 c1 DementedOracle
A good poem, overall. It's a good expression of feeling. I would suggest that you revise this:"And walk on [pass]" to "And walk on[past]." It will still rhyme just fine, and it will be gramatically correct.

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