for Let Me Talk To Time5/1/2005 c1 
194Aslan Israel
Like the comment about everyone walking in the same shoes at one point or another. Very nice. Great job.
194Aslan IsraelLike the comment about everyone walking in the same shoes at one point or another. Very nice. Great job.
4/27/2005 c1 29serenenity-in-chaos
I liked the whole feel of this poem...especially the last four stanzas..The way in which you personified Time was really effective. Nice work :)
29serenenity-in-chaosI liked the whole feel of this poem...especially the last four stanzas..The way in which you personified Time was really effective. Nice work :)
4/26/2005 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
I loved the concept in this, about talking to Time for comfort. Very good, very relatable - keep it up :)
47Anjeni WindsingerI loved the concept in this, about talking to Time for comfort. Very good, very relatable - keep it up :)