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12/22/2010 c1 10Iris Musicia ft. Eliza Ghost
That's so sad! in a greatly written way!

I saw you reviewed one of my stories a while back and I like to repay the favor-didn't realize I hadn't! Very nice poetry :)

-E.G
12/15/2010 c1 1StoryMonster
Very descriptive yet using simple language.

I like the whole idea of it.

I suck at poems, but I like reading them. I'm a StoryMonster. Write stories.

This is like, a song one. Something that can be sung, with a guitar, or a piano.

=]

Great going!
12/11/2010 c1 22FlirtyBirdie
AH. this was really good! i like the structure of the poem, and especially the last line. :) great job.
5/18/2006 c1 MDogg
OMG!

YOU ARE SO TALENTED!

the best poem i ever wrote went.

i am a grape

put me in the suni'll turn into a raisin

leave me alone andi'll be just finefor soon i'll turn intonice red wine

haha i love you homeslice. keep up the writing.

~mayra
5/16/2006 c1 1Flyyboy06
you are such a good poet!it's amazing how much talent you have...your poetry actually inspired my lil attempt-lol-i love it.and the poem is very relatable too-all your poems are.good job.-david-
3/14/2006 c1 87Chaos Apple
Beautiful. I love this, and I can relate. Faves for sure.

Loves, Lie to Me/
6/19/2005 c1 1Infinite Abyss
Great poem.
5/28/2005 c1 Rob4eva
wow i can actually relate to that, it's so sad, but in a good way cos it lets out how you feel. i just wanna say good work.
4/26/2005 c1 Hawk Mage
Very very beautiful. I absolutely loved it.
4/25/2005 c1 112ShadowofDemise
Powerful, and personal, it's really nice and sad at the same time.

"Now I am just an emblem of a flame

Against the wall you will truly see

That only a silhouette, matches me"

That is beautiful.

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