for Glass12/29/2005 c1 
7Seth Fallis
Thanks for the review. I've read several of your poems and I feel myself regressing back to that stage in my life. The teenage angst thing. The symbol of glass is well thought out.
7Seth FallisThanks for the review. I've read several of your poems and I feel myself regressing back to that stage in my life. The teenage angst thing. The symbol of glass is well thought out.
5/16/2005 c1 36snow dragonfly
I liked it, especially the last two lines. The style of the poem was pretty cool, curt beginning leading up to a flowing conclusion.
Nice job, keep on writing!
36snow dragonflyI liked it, especially the last two lines. The style of the poem was pretty cool, curt beginning leading up to a flowing conclusion.
Nice job, keep on writing!
5/10/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
::throws rock at glass:: ::rock bounces off:: (oh well, I tried) Hey, now don't be so hard on your self, I feel this way also. Nicely put, poem.
PS) Thanks for the reviews!
168SeaVoi::throws rock at glass:: ::rock bounces off:: (oh well, I tried) Hey, now don't be so hard on your self, I feel this way also. Nicely put, poem.
PS) Thanks for the reviews!
5/6/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
too bad glass isn't as strong as we think it is sometimes... Nice subject. Good job.
194Aslan Israeltoo bad glass isn't as strong as we think it is sometimes... Nice subject. Good job.
5/5/2005 c1 11Trenton K. Fox
Hey! Long time no read! Anyways, beautiful as always. I love the controlling image (or exten. metaf., whatever you like to call it-tomato/tomAto, right?) I like the "I need to break my habits so I'm trying to build myself up/To break the glass, to not need it, because I'm just that tough". Good read! Keep you pen well inked~TkF.
11Trenton K. FoxHey! Long time no read! Anyways, beautiful as always. I love the controlling image (or exten. metaf., whatever you like to call it-tomato/tomAto, right?) I like the "I need to break my habits so I'm trying to build myself up/To break the glass, to not need it, because I'm just that tough". Good read! Keep you pen well inked~TkF.
5/3/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I really like this, I know this feeling and your use of the glass walls was beautiful. Nice job! QueenVixta
270queenvixtaI really like this, I know this feeling and your use of the glass walls was beautiful. Nice job! QueenVixta
5/3/2005 c1 17incandescent.smiles
wonderful job. This is just GREAT. One more poem like this and you're going on my favorite authors list! The idea is, once again, a terrific one, and now that I think about it, very very true. at least in my case. well anywho, lovely job!
~leila*
17incandescent.smileswonderful job. This is just GREAT. One more poem like this and you're going on my favorite authors list! The idea is, once again, a terrific one, and now that I think about it, very very true. at least in my case. well anywho, lovely job!
~leila*
4/28/2005 c1 130blackrosestears
kind of self-hate thing? It's really good. I like it a lot. It's very pretty and has a nice flow. Keep it up.
130blackrosestearskind of self-hate thing? It's really good. I like it a lot. It's very pretty and has a nice flow. Keep it up.
4/27/2005 c1 Lexy
OmG that wuz awesome! oh the kewlness! :รพ
OmG that wuz awesome! oh the kewlness! :รพ
4/26/2005 c1 7iftherewerewater
Good job! This is very relatable, putting up glass walls to protect myself. Very good!
Cass
7iftherewerewaterGood job! This is very relatable, putting up glass walls to protect myself. Very good!
Cass
4/26/2005 c1 10Targen
Dude, i always thought of glass as just glass, but after reading this my mind is changed and there is more to glass than meets the eye. Nice job =D
10TargenDude, i always thought of glass as just glass, but after reading this my mind is changed and there is more to glass than meets the eye. Nice job =D
4/26/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
nice! the format can almost look like a piece of glass in a morphed way, lol. a good piece
3Cry Tears of Darknessnice! the format can almost look like a piece of glass in a morphed way, lol. a good piece