for Castle on the sand11/28/2005 c1 
34Smoky Bear
i like this, it's short length prevents the rhyme scheme from being tiring. As an extended metaphor it can be applied to many things, cool work!
34Smoky Beari like this, it's short length prevents the rhyme scheme from being tiring. As an extended metaphor it can be applied to many things, cool work!
10/15/2005 c1 14RinaJewelz
wow, i thought that was brilliant, all ur sentences were like perfect i wouldnt change anything.thanks for reviewing some of my stuff as well, and no im not french lol, just think its a beautiful languagexxCia
14RinaJewelzwow, i thought that was brilliant, all ur sentences were like perfect i wouldnt change anything.thanks for reviewing some of my stuff as well, and no im not french lol, just think its a beautiful languagexxCia