
12/23/2010 c1
9Fox Trot 9
This is so beautiful! The beginning of the poem made me think of a baby in the crib, and the last part made me think of being on one's death bed. This is great poetry!

This is so beautiful! The beginning of the poem made me think of a baby in the crib, and the last part made me think of being on one's death bed. This is great poetry!
9/16/2006 c1
1Spirit Tigress
I saw this as death at first then the last line made me think of rebrith. This is a nice poem! Thanx for reviewing!

I saw this as death at first then the last line made me think of rebrith. This is a nice poem! Thanx for reviewing!
9/15/2006 c1
5Bleu Ciel
Cool poem and rhyming scheme. But seriously... your sister's wedding? That's just wrong XD
Thanks for reading my stories ^_^ Please read some again sometime

Cool poem and rhyming scheme. But seriously... your sister's wedding? That's just wrong XD
Thanks for reading my stories ^_^ Please read some again sometime
4/26/2005 c1
13Draven DarkCrow
*laughs* I would love to have something like this in my wedding scarpbook! I loved it, well done!
xo

*laughs* I would love to have something like this in my wedding scarpbook! I loved it, well done!
xo
4/26/2005 c1
34Unimportant
Very pretty little poem. I liked it very much. Excellent work!
~Unimportant

Very pretty little poem. I liked it very much. Excellent work!
~Unimportant