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3/5/2008 c1 8Written
very real and raw! Nice work, as always.
4/29/2005 c1 6aminim00se
Such a loop. Simple, and compelling, as though no matter where we go, something will break us, and we only may mend ourselves, such is life.

Beautiful work, Sam.
4/27/2005 c1 9weirdchild
O! Me like! Me like a lot! The poem shows emptiness and bordom (not that you were... that the person had nothing to do), or, at least, that's what I think...

PLEASE put a fullstop at the end, because it is a very sharp poem and no fullstop at the end makes the poem hang there in the there with no ending.

V. well written!


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