
4/29/2005 c1
6aminim00se
Such a loop. Simple, and compelling, as though no matter where we go, something will break us, and we only may mend ourselves, such is life.
Beautiful work, Sam.

Such a loop. Simple, and compelling, as though no matter where we go, something will break us, and we only may mend ourselves, such is life.
Beautiful work, Sam.
4/27/2005 c1
9weirdchild
O! Me like! Me like a lot! The poem shows emptiness and bordom (not that you were... that the person had nothing to do), or, at least, that's what I think...
PLEASE put a fullstop at the end, because it is a very sharp poem and no fullstop at the end makes the poem hang there in the there with no ending.
V. well written!
WC.

O! Me like! Me like a lot! The poem shows emptiness and bordom (not that you were... that the person had nothing to do), or, at least, that's what I think...
PLEASE put a fullstop at the end, because it is a very sharp poem and no fullstop at the end makes the poem hang there in the there with no ending.
V. well written!
WC.