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11/6/2005 c1 11sarahhbe
I don't think I'd agree with this being from the perspective of a madman, more from a man deperate to escape this world. If you really want this to seem like it's coming from a madman I'd leave off the last 2, uh, stanzas(?). I like your stuff, very thought provoking and emotionally charged.
4/27/2005 c1 vague shadow
I really liked this. It was powerful and made me pay attention. I've felt this way at times. Great job!


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