for Bruised & Broken10/19/2014 c1 Morgan
Very realistic, well done.
Very realistic, well done.
5/15/2005 c1 
10Miss Lilian
it's really good, but in several places you used the name "Chester" instead of Derek. other than that it's areally good stroy, and very sad.
10Miss Lilianit's really good, but in several places you used the name "Chester" instead of Derek. other than that it's areally good stroy, and very sad.
5/6/2005 c1 25Esquirella
Another really powerful story. I envy how you can get all of that huge range of emotion into one piece. The ending was really sad.
25EsquirellaAnother really powerful story. I envy how you can get all of that huge range of emotion into one piece. The ending was really sad.
4/28/2005 c1 1brokenheartsbeat
oh man...that was really sad...but really good. i like how at the end you have dereks pov. oh boy...time to get some tissues...
1brokenheartsbeatoh man...that was really sad...but really good. i like how at the end you have dereks pov. oh boy...time to get some tissues...
4/28/2005 c1 1Pink808Kitty
Wow, I really love this writing and it's very intense. I'm really glad I red this story.
1Pink808KittyWow, I really love this writing and it's very intense. I'm really glad I red this story.