for IDIOT5/8/2005 c1 
242LauraKM
This is good, the ryhme scheme keeps the flow and the story works well as a poem. A little more imagery would have been nice as it seemed a little like a short story in ryhme form and less like a poem in its own right. Good job.
242LauraKMThis is good, the ryhme scheme keeps the flow and the story works well as a poem. A little more imagery would have been nice as it seemed a little like a short story in ryhme form and less like a poem in its own right. Good job.
5/3/2005 c1 9rotted reverie
Glad to see you're writing some poetry. You've been such an uber reviewer and it takes me this long to realize you've put some new stuff up ::feels ashamed:: Her bf sounds like an uber prick man...sux that you had to take the blame. And screw being the poetic type, it relieves stress well and beats cutting and crap.
9rotted reverieGlad to see you're writing some poetry. You've been such an uber reviewer and it takes me this long to realize you've put some new stuff up ::feels ashamed:: Her bf sounds like an uber prick man...sux that you had to take the blame. And screw being the poetic type, it relieves stress well and beats cutting and crap.