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3/25/2006 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
This is a beautiful poem... yet... eh... I'm kind of confused with the theme... the details were exquisite... but then again... hehe... maybe its just me but... I really don't get the meaning...
11/6/2005 c1 11sarahhbe
For your first attempt, this is very good. I like that it's not the typical ABAB ryhme scheme, however this does make it seem a bit choppy at times. You might want to try an exercise focusing on the number of beats per line.Keep up the good work.

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