for Markus Romanov8/2/2013 c2 
4ImmanenceEnsured
This took a really unexpected turn! I'm a bit freaked out. To be honest I thought Eddie was a criminal. Although cops and street thugs often aren't that different, personality- ànd motive-wise. The ending makes me worried. I do not trust these two men, but I did enjoy every little insight into their heads. Also although they're both idiots, their reactions are natural enough for me not to get frustrated. When Eddie walks out on Mark in the restaurant, he's got a legit reason (at least for him). I love the down-to-earthness of this story.
This is extremely well-written, interesting and original. The intimate scenes were also top-notch. Thanks for the awesome read.
4ImmanenceEnsuredThis took a really unexpected turn! I'm a bit freaked out. To be honest I thought Eddie was a criminal. Although cops and street thugs often aren't that different, personality- ànd motive-wise. The ending makes me worried. I do not trust these two men, but I did enjoy every little insight into their heads. Also although they're both idiots, their reactions are natural enough for me not to get frustrated. When Eddie walks out on Mark in the restaurant, he's got a legit reason (at least for him). I love the down-to-earthness of this story.
This is extremely well-written, interesting and original. The intimate scenes were also top-notch. Thanks for the awesome read.
8/2/2013 c1 ImmanenceEnsured
I love the writing and I love the flow of this story, the way it's so very realistic life-wise, and I loved the slightly philosophical opening, but Gosh. All the people in here, except for Kerry, are such A-holes x) I get that Mark is from a rich family, but where does he get the pretention to write everyone off based on the contents of their freakin wallet? Yet he works with them, dines with them, sleeps with them. Hypocrisy isn't a pretty feature. Don't get me wrong, it gives his character some depth, makes him very believable because that often is the way (rich) people think, but ugh. It made me dislike him to no end. I do wish him happiness though.
Eddie obviously has a double agenda and it shows in his train of thought. The aloofness he observes people with is a tad unsettling, it borders on indifference. I know one thing, I wouldn't want to be his friend, ever. From what I've understood - although they're suspicions since he's still mostly a mystery - he is the friendly and pleasant type, social interesting yet extremely disloyal. Creeps me out.
I don't know if this was your intention, but it's epic how you've managed to convey all these unusual traits in your characters. This is an adult story with adult content, and though that normally isn't my cup of tea I was intrigued. I totally enjoyed this first chapter.
I love the writing and I love the flow of this story, the way it's so very realistic life-wise, and I loved the slightly philosophical opening, but Gosh. All the people in here, except for Kerry, are such A-holes x) I get that Mark is from a rich family, but where does he get the pretention to write everyone off based on the contents of their freakin wallet? Yet he works with them, dines with them, sleeps with them. Hypocrisy isn't a pretty feature. Don't get me wrong, it gives his character some depth, makes him very believable because that often is the way (rich) people think, but ugh. It made me dislike him to no end. I do wish him happiness though.
Eddie obviously has a double agenda and it shows in his train of thought. The aloofness he observes people with is a tad unsettling, it borders on indifference. I know one thing, I wouldn't want to be his friend, ever. From what I've understood - although they're suspicions since he's still mostly a mystery - he is the friendly and pleasant type, social interesting yet extremely disloyal. Creeps me out.
I don't know if this was your intention, but it's epic how you've managed to convey all these unusual traits in your characters. This is an adult story with adult content, and though that normally isn't my cup of tea I was intrigued. I totally enjoyed this first chapter.
7/12/2013 c2 allancaldera
This story was sweet and good I love Markus and the insecurities of Eddie make him adorable he is really a good and insecure character,I hope Markus can help him with his eating disorders and that they have an amazing life together.
This story was sweet and good I love Markus and the insecurities of Eddie make him adorable he is really a good and insecure character,I hope Markus can help him with his eating disorders and that they have an amazing life together.
4/20/2010 c1 1Natural and fake beauty
omg kiddie porn! good god. and omg mark sure can whipp a business man.
1Natural and fake beautyomg kiddie porn! good god. and omg mark sure can whipp a business man.
12/22/2007 c2 McAbacus
This was an intelligent tale of a dysfunctional pair of men and the little kinks of Mark only accentuated it and made it better! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and especially enjoyed the way it ended on a positive, but not complete, note.
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McAbacus
This was an intelligent tale of a dysfunctional pair of men and the little kinks of Mark only accentuated it and made it better! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and especially enjoyed the way it ended on a positive, but not complete, note.
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McAbacus
7/4/2007 c2 2Tackygeek
OMG! Why does this story only have 10 reviews? It's freaking brillant. I have never read a story so deep and just beautiful. I started reading this at 11:30 and it's now 2:37AM. Wow. I'm just in shock. I love how you made both characters so real, and not some cookie cutter description of what people think a rich person is or a cop is. *sighs* Sorry if I'm not coherent (keep in mind it's 2:38am and I have to work early in the morning) but this story is just so freaking wonderful that I'm upset with myself for not knowing it existed until now. I kept like bypassing it because it didn't have a lot of reviews, and I feel like an idiot. This should be a book, no a movie or whatever, because I'll totally buy it. But seriously, this is one of the greastest, if not the best (and I'm being extremely truthful right now) works I have ever read, and it deserves a lot more reviews then some of these dumb superficial male/male stories. The characters are real, and it really felt like I was watching a really good movie. I got the same feelings you get when you read a really good book. Okay so I'm going to stop rambling because I am tired. But hopefully you'll look at this review and know that you have a fan, and if you ever write a book that gets published (because with your talent you should) I think you should let me know, cause like I said before, I'll buy it. Okay soo yeah, going to sleep now. Great work!
2TackygeekOMG! Why does this story only have 10 reviews? It's freaking brillant. I have never read a story so deep and just beautiful. I started reading this at 11:30 and it's now 2:37AM. Wow. I'm just in shock. I love how you made both characters so real, and not some cookie cutter description of what people think a rich person is or a cop is. *sighs* Sorry if I'm not coherent (keep in mind it's 2:38am and I have to work early in the morning) but this story is just so freaking wonderful that I'm upset with myself for not knowing it existed until now. I kept like bypassing it because it didn't have a lot of reviews, and I feel like an idiot. This should be a book, no a movie or whatever, because I'll totally buy it. But seriously, this is one of the greastest, if not the best (and I'm being extremely truthful right now) works I have ever read, and it deserves a lot more reviews then some of these dumb superficial male/male stories. The characters are real, and it really felt like I was watching a really good movie. I got the same feelings you get when you read a really good book. Okay so I'm going to stop rambling because I am tired. But hopefully you'll look at this review and know that you have a fan, and if you ever write a book that gets published (because with your talent you should) I think you should let me know, cause like I said before, I'll buy it. Okay soo yeah, going to sleep now. Great work!
11/3/2005 c2 4Mechanical Dolls
You know, I really love the style of your writing. I can't describe it. Hell, I can't describe anything, so I'm just going to settle with that.
This story is wonderful. Somehow, I always manage to think that Mark's the older one and Eddie's the younger one. It took me a while to realize that they're not. Hehe, it's sweet.
Is this the end? Or are there more? Like, are they going to work on Eddie's eating disorder? I love the fact that Eddie's obsessed with his body and how to keep it fit. His binge-eating and everything.
Thanks for the great story!
~MD
4Mechanical DollsYou know, I really love the style of your writing. I can't describe it. Hell, I can't describe anything, so I'm just going to settle with that.
This story is wonderful. Somehow, I always manage to think that Mark's the older one and Eddie's the younger one. It took me a while to realize that they're not. Hehe, it's sweet.
Is this the end? Or are there more? Like, are they going to work on Eddie's eating disorder? I love the fact that Eddie's obsessed with his body and how to keep it fit. His binge-eating and everything.
Thanks for the great story!
~MD
7/17/2005 c2 Pure
If I wasn't clutching my chest because of the tension I was smiling my ass off as this was hilarious. Superb humor and I'll reiterate the wow! I love this story. I love the twists, the end, - I love everything about it. I'll definitely have to read your works, I'm just stupefied. Cheers!
If I wasn't clutching my chest because of the tension I was smiling my ass off as this was hilarious. Superb humor and I'll reiterate the wow! I love this story. I love the twists, the end, - I love everything about it. I'll definitely have to read your works, I'm just stupefied. Cheers!
7/17/2005 c1 Pure
Okay. Wow! This story is amazing. I love this! My favorite part was when they ate pizza together. That was by far my most memorable moment of this story. Also, I hate that sick fuck Quinton; he can rot in hell; Screw that- hells too good for him... Anyway I need to finish this =) oh and that line: 'There really is no such thing as bad oral' is too true. Cheers!
Okay. Wow! This story is amazing. I love this! My favorite part was when they ate pizza together. That was by far my most memorable moment of this story. Also, I hate that sick fuck Quinton; he can rot in hell; Screw that- hells too good for him... Anyway I need to finish this =) oh and that line: 'There really is no such thing as bad oral' is too true. Cheers!
7/8/2005 c2 32eldrin
Bravo-ness! A story that jolts through every moment, but flows with the smoothest story-telling. Mark and Eddie are incredible. Much love to this writing!
32eldrinBravo-ness! A story that jolts through every moment, but flows with the smoothest story-telling. Mark and Eddie are incredible. Much love to this writing!
7/8/2005 c1 eldrin
Hmm, I interested to know what exactly Eddie is up to. Quentin though... ugh, he needs to have something really bad happen to him. Wonderful story so far!
Hmm, I interested to know what exactly Eddie is up to. Quentin though... ugh, he needs to have something really bad happen to him. Wonderful story so far!
5/23/2005 c1 compunctious
I just went through this long period of reading really shitty stories about true love and butterflies, so when I read these six chapters with these (adorably) imperfect men, it all seemed so ugly. So I have vowed to take a break from butterflies! and read this story in whole by the time I leave the hospital. There will be more comments at the end, I'm sure :)
I just went through this long period of reading really shitty stories about true love and butterflies, so when I read these six chapters with these (adorably) imperfect men, it all seemed so ugly. So I have vowed to take a break from butterflies! and read this story in whole by the time I leave the hospital. There will be more comments at the end, I'm sure :)
5/1/2005 c2 96Liebe Sasa
Your stories are f'ing amazing. This one, in particular. The twists were magic.
I have no idea how you manage to come up with all of it, and so rapidly, but it's great.
I should mention, however, in the first half at one point Mark's name changed to Matt for a few sentences. Also, you have a tendency to use the possessive instead of the plural of certain names or nouns like 'parent's' instead of 'parents.'
~Sasa
96Liebe SasaYour stories are f'ing amazing. This one, in particular. The twists were magic.
I have no idea how you manage to come up with all of it, and so rapidly, but it's great.
I should mention, however, in the first half at one point Mark's name changed to Matt for a few sentences. Also, you have a tendency to use the possessive instead of the plural of certain names or nouns like 'parent's' instead of 'parents.'
~Sasa
4/30/2005 c1 Kaz
Only reviewing to this chapter because the other chapter was playing silly buggers!
Good stuff... I really liked it... It wasn't until Mark found those websites that I knwe what quiton was up to but I knwe it was something fishy! and I worked out pretty quickly Eddie was a cop... But its good!
Eddie sounds like he needs a hug though :(
Only reviewing to this chapter because the other chapter was playing silly buggers!
Good stuff... I really liked it... It wasn't until Mark found those websites that I knwe what quiton was up to but I knwe it was something fishy! and I worked out pretty quickly Eddie was a cop... But its good!
Eddie sounds like he needs a hug though :(